Hahaha! Cute! I always love babies... You portrayed Eldarion well here. I love the banter between Aragorn and Legolas too. They were cute too in a way!

This snippet was short but well to the point. I like it that way. Although, if you had other snippets about baby or young Eldarion, I would greatly appreciate that!

10/10

This is very sweet and well-written, I don´t understand why you didn´t get more reviews. But then, I´m suffering the same...sighs...
Anyway, I really liked it!

Now this is a first, a Eldarion just born story well done as usual. I hope everything is going well for you, you write beautifully.

CUTE! a lovely story which is pure fluff and humour, i love it, the banter is great and endearing at the same time.

Wonderful story! Very sweet! I laughted when Legolas said that he had been more trouble than Eldarion will ever manage to be :) How true ;)
Great work!

That was a delicious story. it was funny, sweet and very perceptive vignette. Congratulations.

Estelcontar

Ahh, that was too cute! I loved the banter between Aragorn & Legolas, it seemed very real.Aragorn is awestruck isn't he? I remember a similar thing happening to my oldest brother when his first son was born--he had a sheer dazed look on his face for hours and I could hardly prise his son out of his arms.Aragorn's actions reminded me of that.The wonder on my brother's face is something that I'll always remember.

Eldarion is so adorable. I also loved the conversation between Aragorn and Legolas.

I read this at Teitho and enjoyed it very much.

The conversation between Legolas and Aragorn was great. It's always amazing to me how enthralled a new father, no matter his rank, can be when he holds his first child. My brother was like that. A very nice little slice of life.

Aw... Very cute fic. I imagine that baby Eldarion would be adorable! Good use of humour, too. Lovely little one-shot.

Hugs,

Sarah x