humph!
there should have been kissing scenes!
even if it's just one!

Aww... Kawaii! You should write a little sequal!!

I wouldn't say it's take-it-down-it-burns-my-eyes horrible, but it's not the best one-shot I've ever read. The main story idea was good, but it definitely could have been writen better.

I hope I wasn't too blunt... I'm sorry if I was.

wua~ i think hiyono will be death +sob+ but i'm glad everything's fine and ayuxhiyo can live happily^^