   preety-lady-serenity 11/21/09 . chapter 1This is so sweet! I can just imagine little Smithers sitting on a chair with his feet not reaching the floor yet, waiting for a command from Burns.
Kudos
Keep writing |
| Jaslazul 8/18/08 . chapter 1 That was really good, despite me not knowing the context.
And fluffiness isn't all that bad. :) |
| Cara 10/25/07 . chapter 1 Wow! Such an amazing and sad story! You've got them both in character! I loved it! |
| l guilty pleasure l 8/14/07 . chapter 1 Very cute! :) |
| HarleenQuinn 8/4/07 . chapter 1 Aw, that was so cute and well-written! :D |
| batsbutler 7/29/07 . chapter 1 Ah *Dreamy sigh* Yet another wonderful Smithers/Burns moment. ) Beautifully written and Smithers was so cute when he crawled into the bed. I was kind of hoping he'd do it again 23 years later, but I think Burs would have flipped and tried to beat him with Bobo! LOL! There must be some way to get them together! I may have to knuckle down and write a fic one of these days! |
| justamirrorforthesun 7/15/07 . chapter 1 That was wonderful. Everyone was well in his character, and Smithers was just adorable. I wish you could write more of this... |
| random person 5/6/07 . chapter 1 Oh, that was so cute and IC. People have been writing some great stories about Smithers, which is cool, 'cause he's kinda my favorite character. |
| Zesty Cactus 4/29/07 . chapter 1 this is pretty good
Fluff love
HEY I KNOW YOU.
This is tangledupxinplaid
HOW DO I KEEP FINDING YOU XD |
| Starmoon 4/28/07 . chapter 1 Yes, Smithers does need some loving. |
| WLiiAfanatic 4/9/07 . chapter 1 Wow, awesome story! Smithers and Burns were so in character throughout (Burns especially during that stapler bit). And it was just so adorable when young Smithers crawled into the bed.
You're very talented. Keep up the great work! |
| sn0zb0z 3/19/07 . chapter 1 Great story and well written. Well done! |
| girlperson2235 3/18/07 . chapter 1 Aww...that was so adorable! I agree that Smithers and Burns should get together, as you already can tell... ;)
Overall, the story was well written and everyone was nicely in character (a problem I tend to have sometimes _ |
| Stevie V. Scrivello 3/18/07 . chapter 1 Excellent, just excellent. Those two are my favorite, and I adore anything involving them. The story in itself was very, very well-written. While this may sound like superfluous praise, I hope that you accept the compliment. If you don't believe that I enjoyed this, that's alright too. :)*faves*
-Stevie V. Scrivello
I Live to Please and am Pleased to Live |
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