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| Connie 2008-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm impressed! I'd love to read more, if you've continued this anywhere or if anyone else has a similar idea that you know of. I just love aliens and captivity and the whole 'wild zoo animal' thing heh. I also just want to read more about these characters, no need to ever meet up the the DBZ group. I love Saiyajin (and aliens in general) culture and stuff. Sorry, tired here. Stupid all nighter is me; just randomly picked a short story to take with me to bed :) |
| Xstarlight-dragonX 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abuseO, this is good! I would like to see more. |
| Sienna Maiu 2007-04-15 ch 1, | abuseoh... this is good stuff |
| AyumiFallassion 2007-03-26 ch 1, | abusePurple hair from the sire, are they descendants of Trunks? This is really cool, keep going with it! |
| Azamiko 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseWhoa, very awesome. Seriously. Rocks. |
| Kichi (not logged in) 2007-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abusevery interesting |
| Zarkcus 2007-03-19 ch 1, anon. | abusewow this pretty cool and very original please continue it further |
| Kizmet 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseInteresting start. I hope to see more. |
| Dragoncat 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThe characters are totally new to me, but I like how the story is going. I look forward to the next chapter. |
| TGP *too lazy to sign in* 2007-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseo.o...O.O... THE SHINING ANGEL OF FANFICTION IS WRITING DBZ! *in total bliss* Or, at least, wrote a fun DBZ drabble! Oh, this was great. Yay Saiya-jins *waves a flag* Yay Asuka *waves another flag vigerously* |
| Makokam 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseO. Oh, I liked this. I liked this alot. It was interesting the point of view change. And I was impressed by how well you were able to make it sound like non-humanoids. Is there any intention to continue? |