Amazing story, captures Draco perfectly. I feel so sorry for him :/
Love the "Kaleidoscope" theme, it's really clever, and fits in with Draco well. :)

So sad... but beatutiful...I really, really liked it.

Really good.

Ohmigod, so sad...you showed Draco from a different aspect than normal, a side we've never seen before...I really understand him now...
I love the ending, poor Draco...his life holds nothing now. Also, i could really visualize the scene, that's how well-written it is.
-Alli

its good but too short. I think you should write more.

crawl into a hole? are you KIDDING me? this was brilliant, really brilliant. I love the kaleidoscope metaphor, the very concept of using colour and a change in someone's life as the central theme to a story. Entirely original, and very well written. Well done!:)

Ah. That was so fantastic! I really like how you describe what each and every one of the colours mean to Draco, especially the conclusion drawn in the end, that he's just a faceless Death Eater now. That was so utterly fabulous and heart-wrenching. Well done!

Delicate, beautifully crafted first line. It just sets the scene, just like, y'know, in a movie.

Every member of the circle flinched at Draco's unwise words

I can just see that. Poor kiddo. Are his parents there? How horrible for them to have to witness this.

Colours of his life flashed before his eyes: red, yellow, green, pink, blue, white, black, all blazing in quick succession.

Exquisite, just like the descriptions after that. It puts Draco in such a realistic light. I like how you portray that he likes Quidditch and associates it with yellow. Very sweet. And the jealousy of Crabbe and Goyle, I can understand that! Poor, poor kid, I guess that's how you feel after you're after Crucio, like the world's just black-and-white and stuff. Hopefully, he'll recover, I love him too much to see him crushed!

Btw, awesome fic. I adore it!

I love metaphors. So I really loved the whole "Kaledoscope" metaphor to life. Very good job :)

::feeling very sorry for Draco:: well done, a very involving characterisation.

I came across this on Story Of The Day, on The Reviews Lounge Forum. I'm glad I did. This is one of the most brilliant, meaningful oneshots I have ever read; the colours and their meanings were all stunning, while those end few sentences just blew me away! So touching... Nice to think of Draco being jealous of Harry, Ron and Hermione. Well, not ice, but you know what I mean! Great decriptions, people, similes, etc, etc... need I go on! It's a fantastic piece of writing, you deserve way more reviews. ^_^

Makes you feel sorry for Draco don't it?

This was magical and realistic and just, wonderfully well written. I find reading Draco fics so hard, yet you really have managed to capture his true chatacter and his emotions so perfectly.

I am adding this story to my Character Sketches C2 because I really do believe it is the best portrayal of Draco that I have read. Thank you!

- Frayed

/Incredible./ You really captured Draco's characterization well.

Good or bad? I'm going to take the third option and say awesome, thanks. XD

This was so unique and sad...it's really, really brilliant. :)

I promise I would write a better review if it weren't six in the AM, so sorry 'bout that. XD

again...awesome job. meep.

~jaye~