reminds me of the last episode of Blackadder goes forth

that is quite beautifully written.
you have the most intimate, real, (i don't know, maybe true is the word i'm looking for) way of stating things...
"the bitter beloved taste" of youth...
excellent line.
please keep writing.
you give fanfiction a good name.
-seri

I've always liked your storytelling style, Hyel especially the one shots.

This was admittedly your most bitterweet short story around one of the most harmless charcters in the Discworld universe - I like the way you captured that Old Edwardian spirit in Blouse's memories of his school.

Very nice.

My best line ever:

~He watched hope die in Perks's eyes~

Wow!


Cat