I wish you would update this is pretty good. :)

I like this story! Please update soon!

I'm very curious and more than a little concerned about what will happen when certain parties invariably meet. Given this is Faith we're talking about, a brawl or threesome are both likely outcomes and neither would go well for those involved. Liking forward to how the town deals with the new arrivals. Until next time.

Hopefully your writer's block has run away as I think Tara / Xander has so much potential.

Great to see you back!

Tara's family seems to believe their bull crap here and do actually love her, even if they usually keep her down and away from anyone else. Interesting to see how Xander and her get on. Until next time.

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Turtles aren't amphibians, they're reptiles. Otherwise, I like the concept.

Ah, I was hoping to actually see the TMNT help Xander out a bit, but I guess Xander might try to eat Splinter and that wouldn't go down well.

Interesting story, very dark, but still has hope shining in it somewhere. Looking forward to how you build on it further.

Until next time.

break the collar Xander

i love Alpha Xander really Xander should keep being possessed by the hyena

I like this. It's an interesting idea. I would have liked more explanation as to what Xander's "training" would have been. Did the Alpha Xander completely swallow the normal Xander or is there some bit of his human side left. If so, it would be interesting to see some of that. Little things that might trigger confusion as to why they're familiar: like country music making him sad and not being sure why, or an episode of Scooby Doo that make him feel some deja vu. Personally, I've always liked Xander's dark moments but I love him when he's most human. Really well written though, Ian't wait to see where this is going!

interresting, i'd keep reading but there's no more chapters...i don't think i've seen a story quite like this,

though i'm only just getting into buffy fanfiction.

I really enjoyed this chapter

and can't wait for thr next!

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