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ZapZapYotsuba 4/1/12 . chapter 14
That was sooooo good *.*

The emotions Heero was conveying blew me away - my heart ached for him :(
AndrewsRedSweater 3/15/12 . chapter 14
Wow Zapenstap-I have been a big 1xR fan of your for years-how the heck did I ever miss reading this one? Well, I guess in a way I am happy I did miss it. Why? Because it was such a BEAUTIFUL SURPRISE to find and read yet another 1xR gem!

This was BEAUTIFUL. I think it's 100% believable for the GW universe, you portrayed the characters beautifully (especially all the pilots and Relena!), and I absolutely love the recurring motif of the pilots POVs of Heero and Relena's history. AMAZING. This was such a treat and I am adding it to my fave stories list. Thank you so much for your brilliant writing. Your 1xR pieces are some of the very best on the internet! Cheers!

(And, by golly, keep on writing 1xR if you feel so inspired-I know I am certainly not your only big fan ;-)
Jen23 1/4/11 . chapter 14
You have a wonderful way of describing exactly what Heero and Relena are thinking. I love how you don't rush a scene and how you keep my eyes not leaving your written words for a second. You write so well that I could feels Heero's pain after he hurt Damion. The way you wrote how scared Damion was, was just so extremely convinceing. The way you write the kisses, and what they see in each others' eyes is beautiful. I have been craving reading some romance, and I find that you are an expert at it so thank you. I look so forward to reading more of your work when I get the chance. Please know how much I have enjoyed reading this tonight. Keep up the excellent work.
akatsuki-hime 11/27/10 . chapter 2
You write a very interesting story, my friend! This is actually my first HeeroxRelena fic that I read, and I'm like so happy that it's written well. The plot is going smoothly and the pacing is nice. The characters are portrayed well too. I'm gonna recommend this to my friend.
Keybladem 3/8/10 . chapter 12
One of the best, most in-character Gundam Wing stories on this site. You have Heero, Relena, Trowa, Wufei, and Quatre's characters down.

I love Duo's comment and the reference to the punch in EW! "It's a lot funnier when that happens to someone else!"

And the Heero/Relena romance is amazing. Absolute poetry. And well done, finding a way to bring the Gundams back!
rulana abidi 9/24/09 . chapter 13
the story is so full of details and the way u've written each scene was like u've been through it , not alot of people

are capable of doing so unless they've been through those situations and emotions and im guessing some of them never happened to u (they couldn't) . the way u waved the story was very smooth and connected , not to forget about the excellent use of language . i've read alot of great 1xR fictions and alot other fictions in general and i must say that ive never come across one with so much work and time projected through.

this is my first review ever but i thought u deserved it D
Icezera 11/12/08 . chapter 14
really great! definitely one of ur best works.

however, i think heero should have been more violent or out of control at first. heero is so drawn in that his explosions need to be completely exaggerated to make an even bigger impression on the reader. sure its ooc, but if its done correctly, it just becomes logical. after all, 3 years of working for a girl and getting it thrown away? that's kinda harsh and a guy will react accordingly. other than that, the story was marvelous. i hope you work on amour again soon!
NightsMist 9/10/08 . chapter 14
Zapenstap, your stories amaze me!

This story has got me in awe

:]
shadowglove 2/24/08 . chapter 14
OH, I LOVED THAT!
Ben 10/8/07 . chapter 14
Wow. This story was AMAZING!
Kandida 8/16/07 . chapter 14
I read this whole story in one day!

What a beautiful story!

I fell in love with Damion though, Damion, Relena belongs to Heero!

Ypu can love me instead !
Nadia 6/6/07 . chapter 14
i'm reading this every year and this is my 4th time and I still love it!
serenity-relena 9/14/06 . chapter 14
I LOVE THIS STORY! I love when you include the other characters...pilots...etc. You have such a way of writing that truly captivates...at least me anyway. You are the only writer on here that has me wanting to read all of your Gundam Wing stories...I'm almost there. :) Keep up the beautiful and inspiring work. :)
Trumpet-Geek 8/4/06 . chapter 14
Simply put: it's cute. I mean, there are spelling mistakes aplenty, but not as much as some, and it definitly does not hinder understanding of the plot. Nicely done.
Airurando 6/13/06 . chapter 14
I applaud you. I read this story years ago and recently felt the need to re-read it... and I couldn't tear my eyes away. I read it in one sitting, beginning early in the morning, and was up until freaking 5 am with it. When your reader's eyes bleed because they can't stop reading your story, I'd say that's the mark of a superb author. I hope that you write original stories as well, simply because I think the world needs to hear your voice.
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