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Reviews For: Till Love Do Us Part

CarolinaH.Manning
2007-06-13
ch 1,
abusethat was really hearbreaking and beautifuly written
Cookie Gestapo
2007-03-28
ch 1,
abuseGod this made me sad.
This is one of yhose rare stories where I end up hating Eric.
But then I can't just be mad at Eric I have to be mad at Calleigh too.
How could she just give up Ryan like that?
Great Storie though.
Got a lot of emotion out of me.
Lilith
2007-03-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw, poor Ryan! And poor Cal, too! Gorgeously written and absolutely terrific, you conveyed Ryan's emotions so well... I could feel his bitterness.

Kudos!
fleeting.ideas
2007-03-22
ch 1,
abusethen why do it :[
this was good, interesting to see it in first person.

I feel bad for Ryan.
And CaRWash.
mostly CaRWash. :]
CSIMel
2007-03-21
ch 1,
abuseNot really my pairing, but I can recognise a beautiful story when I read one. Brilliantly written, loved all the emotion and power you put into this - top angst. Loved your bitter!Ryan, he was fantastic. Great job with this XD
Lizicia
2007-03-20
ch 1,
abuseHave I mentioned I just love your angst stories? They're just so unique, so incredibly good and touching that I can't help feeling angsty myself after having read one. Oh, and by the way, I love your stories :)
Moony's Lady
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseIt broke my heart, you know that, right? It was, oh, so wonderfully written. I am always dazed by the way you can portray feeling and emotions so realistically... You give me chills every time I read your stories, and your Angst is the best.

Keep up the great work!
ObessedTWFan
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseOh my god, I think one of your best yet. It was powerful and so completely undone before. Terrificiness
Shining Zephyr
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuse-jaw drops in stunned awe-

Wow. I've always read you as the CaRWash writer of all writers, and I can see I was totally right. Oh, my gosh. This is incredible. I love it. There's nothing more that I can do except stare at this beautifully written piece of work.

~Shiny-san
randomwriting
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseNot my pairing, but your writing is quite lovely and it was time I told you. Quite a nice story. You hooked me with your opening, it was very well written. And your last two sentences summed the story up nicely. Made a nice impact overall.
SuperBex
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseWow. That's one of the most beautiful stories i've ever read. You wrote Ryan's angsty feelings so brilliantly and captured a fantastic angsty relationship between them. The story was almost understated, in a good way. The actions were simple but your writing and their feelings were complex and believable.
A really really amazing story.
Bex
xx
Dutchie15
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseThat's it. :P I might as well stop writing right now, because I know this is untoppable. You are too good with words, expressions and emotions to even begin to describe how good. It's short, yes, and it has no dialogue at all, but still it's so much better than almost all fanfics with multiple chapters and great dialogues I've ever read.

Meh, I give up. There's no way to top the goddess. ;)

(not that writing is a match, of course :D)

*bows down to the goddess*
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