A pretty good read. Still a lot of things that irked me. First of all, Charles O'Keefe is old and I don't think Lisa would be dated him, who is what... twenty years her age? Second of all, I never picture Lisa as that "Other-Woman"/Mistress sort of thing, since I pretty much HATE that sorta of person, someone who breaks up a family for some piteous relatonship she/he thinks she has with the husband/wife.

And especially annoys me IF its clearly obvious that the husband/orwife isn't going to leave their family for her/him. It's slightly pathetic and Lisa isn't that pathetic. She hasn't thought about him at all during her kidnapping, which wasn't much of a kidnapping more of a, "You get in the vehicle and go." And she did it without thinking twice. Lisa proclaims she is in such love with this old ** guy yet she hasn't thouht about him for the last four chapters. Hm... and she seems WAY too calm to me underneath this situation.

What a jerk! ANyway, keep writing.

Welcome back, and very nice update.

would have kicked him right back wonder what he plans on doing to her hope its good
maria

That was good loving it so far
maria

It's insane how easy it is to imagine Cillian Murphy saying all of your dialogue! That bit where he says "For the fifth and final time... no," I clearly heard his voice. That annoyance and agitation really kicked in.

Lisa should conform to the assassin lifestyle, since she already has a neck for it! And Jackson won't be letting her go any time soon... eep, I wonder how their breakfast is going to work out!

Good luck in your classes!
P.S. I sent you a reply message for your latest review of Icaria and my computer decided to be stupid when I clicked the send button. Did you happen to get it? I pretty much wrote you an essay.

Haha! A little bit of banter. Finally.

O.O She's sleeping in his room!

I love that their relationship is still bonded by that bizarre balance of trust and hate.

So, what's going on in Jackson's head? Letting her sleep on his sofa and laughing to himself! /glare/
I'm also wondering how dangerous Tom will end up being. I bet he's a real sadistic bastard... once you get to know him. lolz

Those girls are so Alice and Rosalie! Short and bubbly with blonde and bitchy.

Great chapter!
Lisa couch surfing with Jackson? Awesome.

Lol it's backwards. Usually the guy sleeps on the couch. I like it though. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading.

*shivers* I don't even want to know what was in that "special room." Can't wait for the next chapter. This one was a good one, and yes, she is asking a lot of questions lately, but if she didn't, how would we know anything? XD

Please update as soon as you can. I want to see what happens next. And I feel so bad for Jackson, getting that pen in his throat. That was truely a disgusting scene. *shivers* Poor Jacky-poo!! T_T Lol. Haha. XD

Uh-oh. Lol. :) I had a good laugh when you said that you would let Jackson be mean to you any day. Lol. I wonder if you'd still think like that if he was flinging you across the room with a gun pointed to your head. Lol. XD

YAY!! I love Jackson. XD

Ewe. :P