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| Dizzy Dees 2008-07-25 ch 24, anon. | abuseHa! Maybe Dudley will like Hermione? Surely seems more than plausible. :D |
| tryingtobestine 2008-07-25 ch 24,  | abuseOh, I'm loving this... all of it in fact. I don't think I have ever heard of (and then of course not read) a story which have Dudley as a wizard that actually gets training alongside with Harry. Everything was introduced and explained (and also exploited) in ways that made sense. This, of course, makes me cheer for you. *wild cheering surrounding the author * Continue writing! Stine |
| Higuma Otoshi 2008-07-25 ch 24, | abuseI love this fic its so sweet. Please continue writing. |
| tess is rad 2008-07-24 ch 24, | abuseThis story is amazing; I just read the whole thing today. |
| vampirekiss511 2008-07-22 ch 24, | abusehey i have a question can it not be ron and hermonie pairing in the story. i would love a dmhp story but i really don't mind as long as the story is well writtem |
| The Night Air 2008-07-22 ch 24, | abuseHmm |
| wolf-speaker527 2008-07-22 ch 24, | abuseDon't worry about Hagrids accent, it's likely something only the auther can write correctly. Well writen. |
| stealacandy 2008-07-22 ch 24, | abuseI like your story so far, although, as a fan of Dursley bashing, I think you let them all off too easily. Way too easily. Also, the way you write Anthony Goldstien, I'd say you're making canon!Luna look lucid. Anyway, your Draco, too, is very OOC, but at least Dumbledore is in character. Keep up the good work, -mo |
| iluvchocs 2008-07-22 ch 24, anon. | abuseThankyou very much for the update - I love the whole avenger!Blaise idea XD I'd forgotten Harry didn't have his photo album in this version, but it was nice to see him go off with Hagrid regardless. I completely agree with you about Harry/Ginny (unless it's done really, really, really well). I'd read so much fanfiction between the sixth and seventh books coming out that I thought it was just another fanon pairing, and got quite a shock when I realised "Hang on, this is canon!" |
| Fulminate 2008-07-22 ch 24, | abusePretty good chapter, though you have me excitedly waiting for the next one after your a/n... Oh, and thank gad for no Harry/Ginny, you deserve so much more praise for that than a review can ever give. Also, personally, I reckon the less romance and fluff, the better. |
| Fire From Above 2008-07-21 ch 24, | abuseYay for no H/G! Not much happened in this chapter, but at least we got an update. |
| jumping-jo 2008-07-21 ch 24, | abuseohh sweet update hagrids accent was ok |
| Ezmerelda 2008-07-21 ch 24, | abuseVery unique twist! This is the first story I've read in which Vernon is actually an OK guy, and so is Dudley! Also, this is the first time I've seen Dudley sorted into Gryffindor while Harry gets Slytherin. I have enjoyed reading this very much and am looking forward to reading the rest as you get it written. Thanks for writing! ~"~ |
| Chase-kun 2008-07-21 ch 24, | abuseNo Harry/Hermione either please. Another great chapter to add to this wonderful fanfiction. I kind of fell off the story so i had to backtrack a little, but i caught on quickly. |
| RRW 2008-07-21 ch 24, | abuseNo problem with the no Harry/Ginny...what about Harry and Luna...or better yet, Luna and Draco, can you imagine the aneurysm Lucius would have...LOL...but at least Buckbeak won't be executed! |