This is hilarious. And extremely good. With some interesting changes - like the end of the Blue Bastard. Which reminds me - is the entire story in the same continuum? I.e. is KP the same as Kimmie-Cub?

Well, I'm looking forward to more stuff!

Awesome continuation. Pray continue.

MK2

Nice Chapter. Can't wait for the rest.

MK2

An interesting start. I'm looking forward to see how this ties in with the 1st book/

MK2

Nice cliffhanger.

MK2

I like where this is going. BTW, don't worry about folk's thoughts about the violence in your piece. For good or ill, stay true to your story's vision.

MK2

OH Yeah! This continues to ROCK HARD BABY! More. Not a request... an ORDER. ;3 Kidding. But I DO want More.

MK2

This is GREAT! MORE!

MK2

I commend your first chapter.

Truly, best of luck with the rest of the story. I hope you'll write a good one while attempting to tone down the level of violence and profanity that 'Sin City' featured.

Hi. Love your use of the 'Sin City' concept. I'm looking forward to more.

MK2