w8... wheres aang n toph?

oh my! i absolutely loved it! im quite 'starstruck' at the moment. wow i dont even know how to describe how i feel right now. the zuko you have created turns me on...way on...

jo

it is so dark enough ZUKO IS A #@&*$#@ SADIST

this is dark enough i've read it before and i almost cried so now i fell the tears coming on bye bye

nice

wiow
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that waz one evil story
crepy vampire freak
learn to spell beauty
bitch
fucker

Wow,this was good.You should write a sequel,about what happens when zuko reaches hell.That would be great.

That story was sick and wrong! That wasn't darkZutara, that was just a psychopathic Zuko.

I really enjoyed reading your story.

that was freekin awesome!

This is great, but i hate having ZUKO MY BOYFRIEND evil,emo and dark!I want him normal he is so much cuter that way!i liked when he was angry and not eww!

UMM I DONT WANT MORE DARK zuko,ITS STARTING TO SUCK,REMOVE DARKNESS IMMEDIATLEY, I FEEL LIKE BETRAYED IROH!mwuhahahaha!

wow,this chapter was something,i mean it was awesome so much drama and a very,very dark ZUKO!me like!MWUHAHAHAHAHAHA!

wow great

wow it was really interesting chap-1