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shirayuki223
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
e luna! where have you gone? please don't abandon this story, it is THE greatest masterpiece of fanfiction of ever read in my life, no exaggeration. I love it to bits and pieces and it's the only story that's actually made me squeal out loud and bounce in my seat when I found there was an update =P Please please I don't know where you are, but you have many many devoted fans who love this story just as much as I do! :D come back
midori-desu
2009-10-28 . chapter 7
who gave permission for rukia to be a kuchiki if not byakuya? the suspense is killing me dammit!!>A<...and ichigo is being his protective self...smooth move renji, you just kissed the girl of your dreams but it's as smooth as she says she's falling in love with ichigo...rukia kicks honors class butt and i'm kinda sorry for hisagi and i think anyone who reads knows why, what would the next chapter have in store?having read the preview i'm pulling my hair out...you really have your way with words and writing it, really, i think i wont mind reading this good a story at such a late time, i am one of the reviewers rooting for you to PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SUPER AWESOME STORY!!i'll be watching my alerts wide-eyed and waiting
midori-desu
2009-10-28 . chapter 6
i think i had just gone to fanfiction heaven..*.*and the awaited kissing scene is revealed!!XD and i'm getting all giddy over it...their little training session was really epic, but a big frown for ichigo ignoring rukia, but what do you expect when the object of your affection(*cough*obsession*cough*) puts make-up on to hide her true health?. but they made it up for the kiss ^.^ you really are a writing genius TT.TT i cant stop my tears from the swirl of emotions that i am feeling,^.^v peace out



-though, sorry for being too over-familiar with you...if it's a bother i'll just jump off the nearest cliff
midori-desu
2009-10-28 . chapter 5
i think my eyes popped out of my sockets, man you're good!!O.O.I just got carried away by the sweet moments in the story, though i resent ichigo for being a moping pain in the ass for ignoring rukia like that, making her feel sad, i salute hisagi for giving him what he deserved, and kaien for just watching it happen,at least he said sorry in his own sweet way. i'm surprised inoue still ain't backing down even after being told off..and okay, who's the old hag who had the gall to slap rukia, i did'nt get her name, or is it just me overlooking that silly piece of information?and that shithouin is really getting on my nerves, you really have a knack on writing,i just love to hate your antagonists
midori-desu
2009-10-28 . chapter 4
CORNY? i think i just felt my heart burst out of my ribcage from the sheer romance that is ichigo kneeling and kissing rukia's hand like some knight and shining armor pledging loyalty to the princess..i pity inoue though, she tried so hard, but i guess ichigo doesn't fall for girls with two great hills sticking out of their chest*snickers*...as expexted, another chapter that just made me shiver with delight and squealed like a love-struck idiotic high school girl, really you never stop to amaze me
midori-desu
2009-10-28 . chapter 3
and her zanpakuto is revealed along with the deterioration of hisagi's dignity for letting kaien have confirmatioin on having a little(or not so little) crush on rukia with the apparent blush...haha...so let it be said that curiosity killed the cat, or me for that matter, what will happen to rukia? and i think i'll get my answers on reading the next chapter...a big thumbs-up by the way!!^.^ for the chapter that got me to the edge of my seat, literaly, i think my butt's gonna fall along with the rest of me
midori-desu
2009-10-28 . chapter 2
..brilliant, just brilliant ^.^...i could feel more ichiruki moments that will surface and it's driving me mad with anticipation for it, "I'm not a rapist, kid, so stop looking at the entrance like it's escapism."-god that line cracked me up XD(and i still am.LMAO)romance with a tinge of humor really adds flavoring to the story...keep up the oh so delicious work (though it seems kind of wrong, it just thought "good" wouldn't do justice)
midori-desu
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
this story's first chapter really gets me anxious for the next one to read...and i would like to praise you for it being detailed and attention-worthy..your portrayal of the characters gives me an OOC but at the same time a feeling that they really fit into their real..well..characters..i'd actually be waiting for next chapters for this kind of story..befor i forget..you're a really good writer so keep up the good work!!^.^
ceiyn
2009-10-26 . chapter 7
I can't believe I just stayed up ALL night - literally - reading this! And it was amazing!! You have such an intelligent manner of writing, and you kept me totally fascinated! I can't believe that the last time you updated was January - please have mercy! and update soon!! Although, creating this detailed work has to take some serious time . . . agh!! Well, I will be impatiently waiting. Many of the characters are a little OC-ish and I would like to see Rukia with a little more of her natural fire, but I LOVE what you did with this story and can't say that I'd be happy to see any of it changed. Thank you for such a beautiful story!!
Skylight23
2009-09-13 . chapter 7
Hi, I've reviewed once anonymously. Just want to know whether you're going to continue this story or not. I hope you'll continue, 'cause this is my first favorite story in this site ever.
xxXXRukigoXXxx
2009-08-24 . chapter 7
I love your story please update
10/10 all the way
2009-08-05 . chapter 7
this is awsome:) i dont know how you come up with things like this, i managed to read all the chapters in 2 days! please publish the next soon, i loved this chapter so much and it would be a shame if you didn't continue with this story. i might have to read this again, since it was that amazing:)how do you come up with ideas like this?

keep it up =]

thankyou for an amazing read and please continue!

abi

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pAnda143
2009-07-31 . chapter 2
=D heheh..looking forward to read this
None93
2009-07-21 . chapter 7
update a new chapter please
Favored
2009-07-16 . chapter 7
I wonder what the prize is...
The next chapter is bound to be interesting!
Anyway, this chapter was the bomb! I'm glad that this tournament began and ended in one chapter, and I can't wait to read the next!
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