yy! * does victory dance * i knew it...i knew it! yay! i am happy! good job, you tied it up nicely, though i still want to know why josh left viv and gabes parenting...you mentioned about something...anywho, on to your next story!

do i wanna know about the step-on-me nickname?

but awesome story! i cant wait till the next book!

aw...come on! no, i don't hate you, but still KODA? i mean, we barely even know anything about him! and geez, bella really knows how to act slutty...i mean, just cause he's there lets kiss him...LOL. anywho, please update soon, i am glad you threw in her being good to her sister!

wow

didnt c that comming

still think u should somewhere along the line make her and josh mates

i've said that to my parents once...not an event i'd like to repeat let me tall ya...anywho, i still am holding out for bella and josh...was it just me or did it seem like this entire chapter bella was very PMS-ing...maybe she realizes she loves josh and she doesn't want to admit it? ( i can just imagine you reading all my reviews, fromt he very first one pushing for bella and josh, so i'll stop begging...LOL) but just know...lol...please update soon!

Bella's got some attitude.

Continue.

some grammatical errors but great none-the-less...anywho, please update soon!

yay! there is still a chance for a bella josh romance! hope is regained!

Great story, I love it.

ok u really have to update!

i cant wait to c who told them to stop acting like puppies

ur a really good writer but seriously, if u do go into writing, hire a proof reader before sending it to a publishing company!

ok first, very good...second they are only 10...most ten year olds don't talk or act like them...anywho, whatever! this is really good, and don't worry about chapter lengths just keep 'em coming! lol...please update soon!

dun dun dun...scary dad mode...i think you were missing a lot of small words... especially when gabe is yelling...i think...

wow...

more typos, like were for where. it's still decent, though