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Reviews for: The First Time
xaxaxi
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
it's really cute!
NoeyNewAccount
2007-05-18 . chapter 1
lol, that was awesome! I loved it. I also love your description for it. I DEFANITLY LOVE the line when Rikku says "Quality, not quantity, Gippal" Those words will stay with me forever. lol
Dizzied
2007-03-30 . chapter 1
I love the "Quality, not quantity, Gippal" Part. Hilarious XD

I also like the ending. It gives a feeling of finality. (:
Kotono116
2007-03-20 . chapter 1
Oh I love how you do their little quarrels. Its cute!
frizz.i.am
2007-03-20 . chapter 1
OMG I love this oneshot so much! You make the best Rippal fic's and thats the honesty of a scout!
whereowhere-is-my-rabbit
2007-03-20 . chapter 1
OK, i'll get the bad bit out first. It wasn't as as emotive as usual, i think you didn't harness the environment of their situation as well as you normally do. I only got a pretty vague impression of their surroundings. That said, it was still very sweet and cute. I especially liked where you said "Back to where there's more than just him and her and starry nights." And the bit about "maybe when she's got mroe **" made me grin. =D
lonelyngel
2007-03-18 . chapter 1
omgoshers i loved this!! such a good one shot i wish it wasnt a one shot hehe i love the chemistry between rikku and gippal in the story great work!
Seelenspiel
2007-03-18 . chapter 1
she should have done it! to hell with reason~

anyway
“I have more ** than you.”

She glances down at his rear, pausing before turning up with a small smirk. “Quality, not quantity, Gippal.”

that was just amazing lool
japi-girl
2007-03-18 . chapter 1
THIS WAS TRULY AMAZING! And the end had twist, something that I didn't expect at all... I thought she was going to go! Once again, an amazing story from my favorite author of all time! Take care and God bless girlie!
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