Great story. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Short and fillery, but detailed- good for you, I (and probably most of the other readers) had totally forgotten that Ichigo hadn't registered as a Konoha ninja.

Oh, new teammates...(is it too much to presume that Yugito is Yugito the jinchuriki?

hey, u mean the usual container of Nibi?

Ooh yipees, there's a TRUTH. THE truth. Damn the drama!
Hmm.
Long chapter.
...6 more to go.
HOW ARE YOU DOING THIS??

Ooh... this is gettin' good...

that was slightly...cruel of you. I liked Sakumo-san! (thats kakashi's dad's name btw :P) update soon! and please kill the little uchiha bastard soon!

Tihs getting more interesting by the minute...

Hmm, let me summarize...
"Kushina showed up, they all slept in Yanagi's house, and Sakumo died. Oh, and Draye finally stopped calling him Arashi."
Surely this is cause for celebration?

No rest for the weary, huh? Man, I pity Kakashi.

great story plz update!

another nice chapter! update soon!!

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! Man, this is gonna be hilarious. Anyway, gimme your camp address and tell me when you leave and come back.

Of COURSE Ichigo would mind. In fact, Ichiga DOES mind.

hey, this is a good story so far!! i love it; very original. keep it up!!

hey, proof. wat do the orange and white chakra stand for?