Sorry I would've liked it but Neji was too OOC

this is the best fanfic i've ever read!

So cute! Loved it! So going to fav! ^.^

NejiTenfanforever

Yes it is short but do you know where it's going? Somwhere on fanfic to be shared with other readers!

That was good!

I like it! It's cute, and your right, Neji wasnt too OOC. :D Good job

Why won't Uchiha come back?!

Hahaha fangirls XD

Good job.

Cute! This must be my first NejiTen fic to read (you're gonna h8 me for this, but I'm not really a Tenten fan... She really has no character... I mean, I have nothing against her, it's just that she's boring in the series.
This fic was really cute, I loved it. If I could rate, I'd rate it a five. ^.^

p.s.: where's my magical thing happening?

OMG. liked your little author's note at the end and loved the story, good job!

Yay! Nejiten fluffy goodness!

Yay! That was so cute! I liked it :D Hurray for NejixTenten goodness!

Cute.^_^

neji wasnt TOO ooc
i liked it!

...I see no magic from pressing this button.

Which I still say is blue, not purple.

In any case, I thought this was pretty good. You've mainly done first person for Tenten, not Neji...and while it's a bit OOC, I like it.

I would think he would take the opportunity to mention Sakura and Ino's obsession with Sasuke (even after he left, the poor saps!) or something in that manner. But otherwise no humor missing.

The wording of the second-to-last sentence (describing the kiss) doesn't seem quite right. Maybe the choice in verb? Something about "had her in a kiss" sounds weird to me. *shrug* Whatever.

All in all, very nice. (couldn't even tell it was one of your stories until I saw the "Omigawd" at the end.

^^