Trying... to hold laugher... Gyh-HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
"Pan-Dah" Thats hilarious! *clears throat*
The only flaw i found in your story was that there was too much sarcasm.. and negitivity? But other then that, i enjoyed this story! great job!
K.H.

BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

Yay! Finally someone said that Tenten looks like a mouse! Personally, I thought she looked a lot like Minnie Mouse.

I'm trying to imagine hearing Gaara say 'Pan-Dah'. Ha. It's hilarious.

And the fact that Tenten thinks that Gaara is the one with the naive outlook on life is rather ironic, seeing as she's taking things at face value as well just because Gaara says he doesn't sleep.

Pan-Dah...?... so cute omg i love this!

XD funny and cute! I like it! :3

my favorite line:

'"How is that like me?" He said tartly, a little insulted. Kankuro was the fat one.'

haHA!!

sweet. ^_^ Tenten really is naive, isn't she?

Please make it a longer story it was so good. Gives puppy eyes.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!

how kawaii!

lol! you should really continue! i like it! ^^

"Kankuro was the fat one."

GAHAHAHAHA OMG I BURST OUT LAUGHING AT THAT
ROFLFLFL it's just so blunt and mean and aw kankuro. HAHAHAHAHAHA

but this is cute! tenten's just blowing him off as another emotionally messed up kid and he's got this serious urge to kill her. ROFL pan-dah. it's cute!

:)

You better watch out Tenten.

Lol, Gaara is so cute in here, all evil and stuff, he looks so huggable!!^^
(Sorry... I'm babbling, don't I?)
Anyway, Kick ** story, like it a lot!

Oneshot?! What do you mean ONESHOT?!?!??! That's totally a cliffhanger ending! You can't leave it like that!! It's mean! and just plain wrong! Come on...make it multi chapter! I'll send you a telepathic cookie!!

~Tenten

we loved it!
and we support gaaraten fics!
you have to write another one!
(just to let ya know: we are two reviewers not one, cuz we like to share and decided to share this acount.)

=D Awesome!
Lol...pan-dah! ^^
Good job!