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LadyKatherine29 3/21/07 . chapter 3Poor Eric! he's been turned into tool Bobby's slave! (both here and in that stupid angle. Man that's got to beon of the suckest things done.) Jake is lucky to have an honest buddy like Chris Hero. ...must be a sign of the day of the wolf... AJ has become a tool. Cage is still a tool. Traci has lost her mind. Bobby is a tool. (goddess I don't know why he's got a job...) Jimmy is going to go nuts...he hates Hero. Just tons of good action, a lot of drama and over all just a really fun read. Feel bad for AJ once Jake cleans up. Hero, Claudio, and Reed coming for his ass. Damn! Now there's two guys with evil reps. Jake doesn't count for he is fictional. But still that's a lot of angry talent coming for Styles and the rest. |
Aaron 3/19/07 . chapter 2 I hate it when i'm right, Jake was the TNA glue. When he was there things were wild but Jake rose to the challenge, With Traci and AJ and with Brian he was at the top, and virtually unstoppabale but now, Christian is running TNA, LAX and VKM are fueding. Daniels is dangerous than ever, Traci and AJ went to the darkside. Traci with Robert Roode, and "seduced" Eric Young to Robert Roode Inc. AJ's now a jerk. and he lost Brian to a fire. and of all ppl Chris Hero shows up. Their old friends after all, I would be a lot more shocked if it was CM Punk. Hopefully Chris Hero could knock some sense into Jake because TNA needs "the Omaha Outlaw" more than ever. this is wild. Jake is back at square one now, he really hit rock bottom now, Nowhere to go but up. and TNA needs him now. love to see what happens next. |
Aaron 3/18/07 . chapter 1 Wow what a turnaround. When the last story ended. Jake walked into the sunset with his wife, son, his best friend, and the NWA title. Now it seems Jake has fallen harder than what happened that last time he fell, sad that Brian's gone, What happened to Traci, and AJ? and Kurt Angle's in TNA now, and Christian Cage's running the show now. Will Jake be back and if so what will it take to bring him back, and can he regain what he lost? I'm curious how you're going to bring Jake back from this tradegy, and how did it happened? My guess Brian died it was probably an accident, Traci blames Jake for it, but not as hard as Jake blames himself, and he's at his darkest point at at time when TNA needs him. this is a good start love to see what happens next |
LadyKatherine29 3/18/07 . chapter 1hum...I see someone just couldn't stop. Well no matter. Who I'm to talk. Anyway very good set opening. Much mystery and un-expected happenings a going. seems as if something bad happened to someone. Cage is still a prick. Joe got robbed. never liked kurt so can't say as I'm unhappy about what happend to him. yeah my hate over powers me. Over all a very intresting set up. Don and Mike are despondant, never a good thing. Must mean something very horrible happened. Hats off to you, now I get to read more wrestling fic! HA! I win! With several of my fics having been wrapped up for now. Along with a few on temp leave. This makes life very good! Can't wait to see how we got to the events of chapter one. |