... @.@ i am so confussed!
i love this fict but im just damn confused bout the ending >.<
T-T i always cry when ever im reminded of how Zack died WHY OH WHY DID THEY HAV TO KILL ZACK T_T
anyway loved it

Umm... if you'd been paying attention to all the FF7 series stuff over the years, you would realize that you effed up Zack's name: You gave him the last name of "Aegis" when it's really "Fair." Yeah, I know you can make fun of his last name--I do it all the time in my head and my inner-Zack usually spazzes out or just grumbles and walks away to the emo corner XD--but hey, we aren't the ones who get to name the characters, so we can't really complain if their creators give them last names. Sorry for spoiling your fun if I did, but I'm one of those annoying people who are sticklers for getting things correct or as close to correct as possible. Other than mistake with the Puppy's last name, this chapter was really good.

I realise that you forced yourself to write the ending chapter, and it was nice of you not to let things hanging... (like i've done - the hypocrite), but I'm sorry, I really just don't get it at all. Left rather confused, but maybe I was just hoping for a happy ending, sloppy as I am ...

Well, nevermind, thanks for the story - well written.

Uh……. S E P H I R O T H ……

Oh….phew…. *got scared there for a minute *

You’re very wicked you 9254713 whatever your name is! Gr hehe.

Hey Nanaki! What a nice…. Introduction… *cough *

Ha... lots of nice lemon before ...

before... before ...

I’m not sure how long ago you weren’t feeling well, but I hope you are much better now.

Yeah, we all have it from time to time … especially creative ones.

Oh Reno – I’m so glad he’s feeling – something – it’s hard to think of him as being the enemy

Sephiroth glanced in sheer distain and sadness at his usually poker straight hair. Slowly but surely the ends were curling round on themselves, the bangs surrounding his face getting shorter and shorter. Great….now he looked like he had purposefully put curlers in his hair to bring on the ‘desired’ ringlet affect.


Mwahhahaha

It wasn’t until he was a half mile down the road that Sephiroth charged up behind him and launched him against the side of a building. The venom in Sephiroth’s eyes still haunted Zack. The lecherous leer in those piercing jade green eyes. The lust in Sephiroth’s face as he forced his mouth against Zack‘s. The taste of Sephiroth’s blood in his mouth. The sounds eliciting his mouth as he took him again and again….

Wow….. e
*gulp *

Hmm that’s a hard one….I don’t know….perhaps a Spicy Chicken one….that should do. And Sex on the Beach to finish it off with.!”

*loses cheese salad *

He smirked as the blond looked up. Busted. Caught with his hand in Sephiroth’s cookie jar.

Hm… wouldn’t we all like to be caught in Sephiroth’s cookie jar…

Sora and Riku…. Hm…. *wonders * Do I know where this is headed? probably not….. : (

Gak… I can’t stop reading this story … and I have things to do…. Oh, sod it …

Ho…

“Stop it!” Cloud shouted half heartedly. “This is a glass elevator you know!”
*priceless image *

Ah…… breathes a sigh of relief. Thank Gaia Seph remembers.

SuperGreedy

His hands shook as he fought his hardest against being sick….unfortunately for the General, he was in the direct firing line should Cloud lose the battle against his quaking insides.

Gug... I feel sick reading that!

*dreads the next chapters... it's gotta be alright...it's gotta be alright...it's gotta be alright ...*

Sneaky Reno, following Cloud about again. Albeit I love Reno to bits, its fun making him bad!

Next chapter Nibelheim. And, in a couple of chapters, throwing in another LEMON.

Gotta go out in a blaze of glory!


*dreads*

Oww...

Err…Genesis wasn’t dark haired but red … confused me with the dream – although it was G Strife . (unless I’ve misunderstood…) anyway, it doesn’t matter really….


Euw… anyway … this IS torture

Ah… and Sephy cried… bless ….

Oh my god. Access codes and the key card to his….room….”

Oh yay! Oh joy!

The blond watched as Sephiroth stood to his full height of 6’2 and stalk slowly over to his own quaking form.

*yum *


He spun the two of them round so the back of Cloud’s knees hit the bed first. Sephiroth was no ones **.

Whoa! He certainly isn’t! *getting very hot in here… must open a window or something… *

Ah. Sephy so honourable … holding himself back….

Ah….. beautiful stuff …

[Yes, every time Sephiroth’s wing erupts in AC Complete, it’s a very, very potent sexy event and never fails to jolt me.]

I love it that they both have wings

“I could stay like this forever Sephiroth.”
“So could I Cloud.”
Ah…..

Ack …. Scary men with guns ….

You're cruel... can't you give them a bit of peace?

“Your impertinence really does astound me. Why I let you away with it I shall never know….You’re still not listening!”

ah…Shera temping for Hojo eh? There’s a God after all….

Glancing round, Cloud found himself fixated to Sephiroth’s gaze. His eyes were calm and tranquil. A stark contrast to thirty minutes previous when the same man tried to sever his head from his body.

*wheezes *

LEMON! SephXCloud COME ON. YOU'RE DRIVING ME NUTS!

LOL

Yeah, yeah! Cloud loving, Cloud loving!

But... you've already done that haven't you? I hope. And someone hit Zack over the head eh? Not too ferociously you understand... just a tap to put him out for a couple of hours... days... weeks maybe? We don't want to hurt him...

:D

Sephiroth rolled his eyes and pointed to the door.
“Bugger off!”


Yeah, bugger off Zack, we wants action!

“They say he doesn’t train them in the way we think. Supposedly he uses them as some sort of kinky sex slaves!”

oh YEAH!! YEAH YEAH!

No, it ain't enough for me either...

but... at least it's in the right direction!

Eagerbeaver