it was good, you should continue it.

You definitely accomplished what you were trying to achieve. You captured Aladdin well and showed us what was going on in his head as well as thinking exactly like he would. Excellent.

This is so fabulous! I love it so much!

I really liked this story

Hey, you've captured everyone's emotions perfectly, even better than in the movie! Great job. ;) Maybe you could do one where Aladdin actually meets his father for the first time...

Awwwww!

love it. Very well written :)

That was so good! You should really write more! Email me sometime!

That was very sweet and rather well-written to boot! I caught some technical errors, but those wouldn't be too hard to fix. On the whole, I like this a lot. You did a great job and I look forward to seeing more from you!

Hey, how come I missed this until now? Also trying to hide stories from me, are you? ;) Seriously, this is great! A nice little glimpse into Aladdin's thoughts. Very well done! :)

Er okay it was good

Excellent! I have often thought what was going through his mind when he found out, and you satisfied that question very nicely. Bravo!

Wow! You really captured the emotion of the characters. Great job! I hope you write an other story soon.

This is a lovely little story, Sarah! I hope you keep yourself writing because it's obvious you have a knack for it. I really enjoyed reading this! I love introspective writing and I think you got it just right. :)

Great job! I love to know what characters think, too. I check back here every day just hoping there's a new story out... wasn't let down today! :-)