Most awesomest fanfic ever

man this story is great so far. gives me the chills. the good kind

The best Legend of Zelda story I have ever read. Seriously, that was amazing. Your OCs were very likable, especially Hunter, who I grew to love after only two chapters. Neesha took a little longer to attach with, but she was also very likable once she became a lot more prominent in the story. For the most part, all of your OCs were great. I can't really think of one that I didn't like.

Dark Link was such an awesome villain. He was threatening, and very powerful. I loved how you made Link's father the shade itself, and I really love how he was defeated.

I loved entire plot. It moved logically, and except for one incident (The one where the song unites them, that came out of nowhere.), it was great.

I just can't praise it enough. I absolutely loved this story, and I am really sad that I reached the ending, cause I would love to read more. I would move on to the sequel, but that isn't completed, and I hate reading an incomplete story.

Regardless, great work, thank you for the awesome read, and continue to write stories!

Chapter picked up in the later half, the opening sort of brought up thoughts a character might not think about in their present situation. (ex: getting stabbed, and suddenly thinking about all the other times they been hurt) Although you are already forty-some chapters in, I'm already hooked. Not even link remembers his quest. Very interesting, it makes your story unique.

However, I also noticed a couple of places in which both Link and Malon were speaking in the same paragraph. While the story was great, this is not something you want to do. It can become very difficult for the reader to keep track of who is speaking.

Gah I'm so glad you already have the next chapter written because I cannot wait to find out what they're in trouble from!! Another excellent chapter, can't wait to read the next one!!

Poor Link...I know the story and I'm slightly confused as to why things have turned out the way they have so he must feel utterly hopeless. Another great chapter!!

Freaking awesome chapter!! Absolutely love the direction you're taking the story. It's not just the same ole' story line, but it the same ole' story line with a completely new twist. Awesome job!!

omg! this story is so amazing! im sick at home and i've spent all my time reading this story! and i feel amazing! i guess the cure for the common cold is to read this story! i think you should get this published! and im only 13!

I was on the edge of my seat...still am! Awesome chapter!! Love the insight and detail you've put into this chapter. I can really tell you've put a lot of thought into this story and I love it!! Awesome job!

I've added this story to favorites after reading only one chapter...that speaks mounds on your writing!! Extremely well written, a fresh perspective on the series, and Link acts exactly as I would imagine him to...if he talked...LOL Excellent job! I'm an immediate fan!!

Okay, wow, this was a really good read. I laughed a lot, and all in all just had a fantastic time. This truely managed to be of epic perportions. The only bone I had to pick with it at the end of it all was that there was something about the relationship between Link and Zelda that left it feeling not quite plausible or genuine. Either the lack of romantic build up, or just needed a couple more romantic scenes. But, hey, that a small, tiny bone! it was a great story! thank you!

I seem to be writing alot with - things. I like the Idia of a zelda book in fact I read bits of Among the Ashes. But yours is like a really bad mix of all the games. Infact there's alot that's not in the game and there's alot you got horibly wrong. I might finsh your readding your book but I'm writeing my own 4 sure u got 2 many crushal facts wrong 4 me 2 injoy it. And you don't discrib much of the senery and people. SOme books r really good with out that like Pride and Pregidus. But your's even thouse It's baxt of charters we all know and love DISRIB THEM! Own and 1 more thing NEVER EVER WRITE A BOOK IN FIRST PERSON ABOUT LINK! It's just rong write in 3erd person.

This sorie eritats me you get so many facts wrong dose it get better EVER.

I think the game you are basing your stoire on is OoT and 1. young link is 10 2. adult link is 14 3. link dose not get a bow or Epona til his is an adult. If his is adult you just got the age wrong and the fact that he as all ready meet and saved princes zelda. It bugs me you got these facets wrong it will throw they intire plot line off unless. . . Link being a fairy boy takes the form of a 10 year old boy when he is 16 and Mel. is leanding him a houres caled Epon because Epone is a PONNy when link is young.

Yeah..um.. hi there ! great story and i really love everything about it (its a little early, considering its finished, for my review and everything but i noticed something..) On like..chapter 33 there's a typo..

"Link and I walked in on Hunter and Neesha who I think were just about to do something with each other, and Hunter flipped out and left and I followed him because I'm apparently a 'nosy, annoying little brat,'" Neesha said before Hunter could say anything. He raised an eyebrow at her.

That's what was said but however, notice she says "Link and I walked in on Hunter and Neesha .> If link lost his memories..then he never went to go find Navi..and if he never went to go find Navi.. Then theres a big hole in the world where Termina used to be >.> Maybe you should make Termina a sequel? (if you haven't already o.o) like Zelda,Link,Neesha,Hunter, and Malon could all go on a little vacation after a year or so and end up in Termina but each of them get turned into different races by the skull kid.. That'd be funny.. I imagen Hunter as a cute Geurdo girl >.>(i think i spelled that wrong)

Also one thing i liked was the little debate on war-fair between the Goron and Hunter.. I can totally imagen a Zelda style "Advanced wars" game..Ever played that? Its a really good game..alot of strategy involved but it gets annoying at some points >.<

But anyways..I love your story :D I will probaly read any other story you have, after i finish this since im' only on chapter 35, and review on them as well! And if you um, like, write back to me.. Don't spoil anything <.< I haven't even finished 35 yet..Anyways, Happy writing :D