Wow againg this was amazing writting.
I found this story so sad i just wanted to cry, Brooke seemed so unhappy in her self and you really got across the emotions. The pain Brooke must feel havin to be a part of Lucas and Peyton's wedding would really be undiscribable but you managed to do it. It seemed really odd of Brooke to call Karen Ms Scott, but i guess thats how un-conected she feels to the rest of the group. I picture Tamara as being very much the Rachel charater.
By the time it got to the part where Brooke and Lucas are talking in his truck i was in tears you can just feel her pain.
('beautiful disaster' for some reason i really liked this line and i think it would make a relly great name for a story.)
I liked the endding but for some reason i felt a slight twing for Peyton, that would be horrible for her. The endding explained both their feelings very well and Justerfied Lucas' actions (plus i can't fell to bad for her look at all the times she hurt Brooke.)
A great one shot and it was as usual very well written.
Carabell

aw... that was gorgeous! loved it!

That was just amazing.

oh my god i loved this!
it was amazing
i love all your stories!

loved it update soon

that was awesome! i loved the speech at teh very end that brooke gave about lucas! it was so cute...so was this whole one shot! awesome job!

That was so good!! You made me cry!! :( heehee :p It was totally different & unique i LOVED it!! I thought to myself once i read Pucas were engaged do i want to read this it don't its going to be a happy ending but it was & it was perfect!! I think its a perfect ending for an amazing sequel! What do you think? Natalie xx

great oneshot!
love it!
im glad he didnt marry peyton!
loved it!

so good!
love all your fanfics! u're such a good writer!
so sad! love brucas! miss them so much!

oh my god! That was beautiful. It was amazing. Definately one of those stories that leaves you speechless and breathless all at the same time. I have to admit, I got a little scared there when Brooke told him that he was so much more than a mistake and how he had torn her down, but I was so happy when I kept reading. And man. That last line about them blending together, it was beautiful. This oneshot was perfect! You are an amazing writer.

oh my god this was sosososo good. i really didn't expect a happy ending, so i was soosososo happy when there was one! i mean, it was'nt completely happy, it was full of pain and hartbreak, but there was also hope, and love, and just a lot of amazing writing :D
i had tears in my eyes for most of the first part (and last) and then when lucas said he couldnt marry peytino, i seriously had thebiggest smle on my face!

anyway, i loved this so much!

hannie x

Oh wow, I am seriously freaking out...wow! Holy crap wow that was amazing. I screamed..ahah literally screamed at how good that was...freaking wow. Brilliant..wow oh wow...I don't even know what to say...

Shel

I think that you should do a sequal! it was an amazing story

that was absolutely amazing. im serious, that was hands down one of the best stries i have ever read. and its so true. you didnt make everything end perfect and it wasnt all mindless fluff. it was real ad raw and just plain amazing. and so so sad. but honest and truthful and real and heartfelt and i am just so in love with this story. great job, keep writing. you are so talented.

Love it...i mean, that may sound bad because of what happened but true loves always wins over in the end!