 1eclecticreader 2007-11-18 . chapter 1I love the morning after. I think it was cute and sweet. Simple really. Then for CK to choose to reveal his secret is what clinches it. Although LL already knowing all about it because of what happened in "Crimson" was a little twist. All in all, I'm glad they've cleared the air. Great job! |
 bailey1ak 2007-10-03 . chapter 1This is fun. Sorry to hear that there will only be one or two (please make is two) more of these before it is over. |
 HeroesBonesSNPB 2007-09-09 . chapter 1nice story!! :) :P :D u should continue it. CLOIS 4EVER! |
 kikyogirl15 2007-08-08 . chapter 1Great story and excellent job your a great writer keep up the good work! |
 pnoytecknix 2007-03-22 . chapter 1this is a great oneshot, well series of oneshots, i guess. i hope you continue with this. great job! |
 ham337dd 2007-03-21 . chapter 1"What? You're telling me you're from Mars?"..."You mean, you're an alien?" / "Intergalactic space traveler, please." This was funny.
Um, I like it better if Lois didn't remember Valentine's Day. But oh well.
I'm excited about the next one-shot! |
 Ervis3h18 2007-03-19 . chapter 1liked ur writing very much
cant wait for the next part(s) |
 ChristyLoisGilmore17 2007-03-19 . chapter 1These one-shots of Clois are great! I'm thinking of posting mine, but I'm not sure. Can't wait til your next one!! |
 Tigger101 2007-03-19 . chapter 1Lois must be a really good actor if she was able to pretend she forgot that 'incident' on Valentines' Day. I don't think she'd be able to keep it in for that long, but you never know. I wouldn't mind her knowing actually - its kind of annoying when
everytime there is a 'Clois' moment they are either on something or don't know who they're kissing. *sighs*
This started off really well but I didn't like the last part - I thought you could have maybe expanded on some of the ideas and emotions a bit further like you did at the beginning...
Tigger101 |
 gunnman 2007-03-19 . chapter 1Wonderful. I could actually feel what your characters were feeling.
Gunn |
 atipsypony 2007-03-19 . chapter 1 Fun, very fun. Clark is absolutely befundled and its great. Your one shots are great. |