it was great!! i imagined kai with tyson (of course!!) i personally believe they are perfect together!! i think it described kai perfectly and i also think the only person who has ever been able to get through to him, and past his barriers is tyson. therefore it went great when i was reading it as a tyson pov. great work!! rebecca xx

I imagine him with Tyson. But that's just cause I manage to see Kai with Tyson even if it was written about Kai and Hilary, so you know.
I thought it was amzingly written, and really breathtaking. What makes me imagine Tyson is there's just something about it. I can see it as a boy, because of a few lined here or there, and I don't think a girl could break down Kai's barriers like that. So naturally, the hidden shipper in me is making connections.
And I also think Tyson is the kind of person who would understand Kai him like that. Wouldn't need any words, or any big flashy actions to show Kai how he feels. Because I imagine Tyson actually being quite deep and thoughtful, and the loud, brash exterior is just a mask, a show. That's why I think this is Tyson, because of the almost psycic understanding running under the words.
I'm rambling, and I think most of this should be on a shppers debate, which this isn't, so meh. Moving on/.
I like to try and give constuctive crit, but I can't seem to find anything to be critic about. The words flow easily, and it seems like thoughts. The ideas and words flow easily and connect, but there's some kind of dreamiy floatiness to it that makes me really belive it's being thought.
As for the other connections I see here, I'm watching too much Naruto, 'cause I can see Naruto huging Sasuke like this, and understanding like this, but you probavly don't care so nevermind.
I also love the fact it doesn't have to be romantic. It can be a plain but deep freindship and brotherly love, the kind of best friend love that we share with our best friends. I'm lucky to knbow what that feels like.
I'm rtambling a bit, and this is getting long, and I'm an anomynous reviewer so
ByeBye
DarkWingedDevil

Beautiful, simply beautiful. I don’t know why but for some reason I get the feeling it’s Matilda, she just seems to fit some how. But yeah totally loving this fic. lol see ya

Luv Lamb

Kai-OC LOL. It really can be anybody.

It was awesome! It really felt like Kai's reaction you know! It was really great ^_^

I imagined That the person is Mariam from Saint Shields ^^

That's excellent!! I love it!!What I want to know is who did you imagine him with while you wrote it?*Heh,heh*And as for me..well,guess!
QDA

Obviosly a kai hil!

Sweet! So awesome!

Hye Mika!! It was so awsome!!

I love how you didn't tell us who it was. It only added to the story. It's just so damn sweet!

It's so sweet, you could melt candy with it.

I imagine him with Julia... but by the way you worded some of it, I have to guess you were thinking Kai/Hilary when you wrote it.

The person is shorter than Kai, and they called him capitain so it's someone from the bladebreakerz or blade sharks (the last one a doubt)

it was awsome, just like you

dong-chun-mei

Like you said it is short and sweet. I like the way Tyson seems to be so understanding and gentle towards Kai and Kai accepts Tyson. You're quite a writer. Try some more stories. Good luck!