hehehe... upload more please?

shika should so be the uke he's the one with the ponytail XD! but he really should and kiba would be the seme XD!

AWESOME STORY! THIS IS SUCH AS HOT PAIRING! XD
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
d.k.-chan

I'm begging like Kiba...please? More...please?

Wow i love it. i think that its so dramatic and kiba is so jealous ^=^ I think that you should just go for it and just write and orgy story! WITHOUT OROCHIMARU! he scares me... everone else is good to go though. o did i say i LOVE IT! cause if i havent then there it is... o i already did o well i like to repeat myself. o and you should also make your own characters to get in on the action. thats what me and my friends did

that was awesome!

okay I already reviewed ch. 9 so I want 2 tell u thx a million for putting my character there! woot!! I hope the smut involves *coughMyCharactercough* I hav 1 of those feelings. But please more ShikaKiba or KibaShika.

Arai, "Smut No Jutsu,"

I love your stories! But dislike the speed...the pressure is killing me! AH! If u take any longer ur fans will die of waiting. But I will be waiting face glued 2 the comp screen 4 this story 2 update lik a good lil' fan.

If u need help u just ask me!! I'll be more than happy 2. PLEASE UPDATE FASTER!

Dude... that like completely sucks for Kiba... So many interruptions. lol, anyway loves it!!

YOU STOPPED THE SHIKAKIBA SCENE!?!!?!? O_O

BWAH!??

But nice haha, we're all counting on you to bring us the next chapter! Good luck

great!! GREAT! but why did u have to end the skika/kiba scene like that? it was cool i loved it. if u don't continue this story bunnies will rule the world!
sry i got that from a bleach fanfic!

Oh, MY.
After this chapter, I wasn't satisfied with just an enthusiastic review. So I added your stories to my favorites!! (which also notifies me when you post new chapters..eheheh *hint hint*)
Great job!
Especially with this chapter, Shikamaru and Kiba are so cute (in the good way, not the girlish way, of course)!

OMG!
This is one of the best Naruto fanfics I have EVER read!! I'm serious! The way you characterized them is just PERFECT, and it shows that you are a huge fan, every little detail about them is faithful to the real story... and then there's the smut, of course! (...ah, not enough though... how could you be so cruel and leave us with a cliff-hanger?? *pouts*)
Are you thinking about uploading some new chapters soon? Pretty please? *puppy-dog eyes, like Akamaru* XD XD
I'm also curious about the bad guys, since you devised them together with other fans of your story... I can't wait to see them in action!
Oh, and one last thing, aside from the obvious protagonists, I enjoyed your Naruto immensely! The way he stand between them, but really doesn't, as shown when he tells Kiba to go after Shikamaru... I mean, such a caring Naruto, like you don't find often in fanfictions of this kind... I loved it!
So awesome job, and please, PLEASE, update a new chapter soon! ^_^

this story is so funny.. i love the relationship you have between shika and naruto is perfect. kiba's jealousy is perfectly described. try clarifying the enemies a little better..that will help a little better. you threw them in there a little too fast.

Pretty good...but please make the rest longer! It's making me desperate! And I love my character Arai!! Even though he is like mention only a few or maybe even once! Please continue! And great job updating!

oh things are getting heated! Lol :d I can't wait to see what happens next! Good job!