 Raven'sWinterRaine 8/14/10 . chapter 1Awww! This made me cry! It was so good! It didn't seem OOC to me. It just seemed like Dib finally got to Zim, and the Earth changed him while he was there. XD Loved it! |
 MyAutopsy 5/1/10 . chapter 1i like it :) it could become a great story |
 xxemo-princess666xx 5/30/09 . chapter 1aww i liked it! u shud have made more chapters. :3 |
 alan is stupid 1/14/08 . chapter 1Jeeze... I've been reading your fics all day, and I can't get over how amazing every one of them is! They're all so deep... and ZADRish! Hooray! :D This line really stuck out to me:
"Zim would reluctantly admit that of all the hundreds years he’d lived, these 3 had taught him the most. The funny thing was, he hadn’t a clue to what he had discovered. All he knew was that it was Dib’s fault."
Aww. :3 Great job, as usual... You're a great author, I love all of your stuff!
-Audrey |
 Colonizedbagel 1/8/08 . chapter 1If you take Mopiness of Doom into context, then no, this isn't OOC. I would have added a little more about Zim trying to deny it, but he would eventually give in and become a lot like this. He becomes very lethargic in Mopiness of Doom.
And I actually liked it. I've always felt like after a while, Dib would have to find a new motive, or he would just run out of reason to do it and lose interest. He's a smart kid, and he'll know sooner or later that there's no chance Zim will win.
(Although he does, in the mini-comic, but that had nothing to do with his plots). |
 Reginleifthevalkyrie 7/8/07 . chapter 1... Holy F- this is amazing. And it's not THAT OoC, it's how ZIm would go if Dib quit. Think Mopiness of Doom except after trying for so long Zim gave up differntly . |
 The Illustrious Crackpot 6/2/07 . chapter 1Very cute. Very very cute. And almost exactly how I think a close-to-canonical ZADR would come to be. (Inside: WOW, a ZADR that doesn't involve Dib confessing love! ...Not that I've read an overwhelming amount of ZADR, mind you, but I've seen so many parodies...) |
 AmyLB22 4/29/07 . chapter 1Heh. Don't be so upset. Zim doesn't does agree with romance. But I do! Seeing as this was my very first ZADR fic I've ever read, I think it was pretty good. I could see it happening in my mind.
And it made me wanna slap Dib across the face and drag him back to Zim, but that's another story. Heh. ; |
 DPG and Tula 4/8/07 . chapter 1I am being a good monkey and reviewing, even though my reviews Teh SuCK! XD
I don't know, for an angst fic Zim didn't seem too OOC. Then again, maybe the fandom is just starting to dull my awareness of it. :/
I thought it seemed good and well written...and it made me want to thwap Dib over the head with a waffle. You! Get back there and huggle the Zim! |
 Desdemona Kakalose 3/19/07 . chapter 1don't be too hard on yourself. this genre's a bitch. takes time to write satisfactoraly. and anyway, i kinda like this fic. even if it is a touch depressing |
 DemonSurfer 3/19/07 . chapter 1Don't worry about it. Zim any kind of romance OOC. It's just a fact of life. Zim does not do romance.
Aw. I think I've read this one before. Or one like it. But there are a few lines added to the end. |
 Invader 2150 3/18/07 . chapter 1Yay, I love ZADR! Even if Zim does get OOC, maybe it's just how they changed over time. I'm not really sure how that'd work. But I still think this was pretty good. |