ROFL! I got the ending- hilarious! And... once again (YOU GUESSED IT) cute! Sara disciplining a toddler... That thought'll keep me amused for days.

~IGC t DM

This was really just lovely and adorable. Very very good.

I really like your CSI fanfics. I hope you will wrote more soon.

That wily man! Hey, whatever works. Sweet and satisfying fluff!

that was great!

i was a little confused about where you were going with this at first..

but you pulled it all together in the end [:

great job!

to my favorite list you go! [:

thanks for making my day!

ADORABLE!

Very cute! I really enjoyed the playful banter between Sara & Grissom. Thanks!

That was really good. I can see where people wouldn't get it but I did and I thought it was quite funny actually.

This was a masterful piece of fiction. I loved the way Grissom subtly directed the conversation- you had both characters pegged perfectly! Thank you for a wonderful story.

Lmao, that was so funny. Really well written. Well done :D

Well, if you mind doesn't work like other kids...then mind doesn't either! I totally got your vibe!

Did I ever tell you I love your stories?

...and I do!

~taramis

Delightful! Extremely Appropriate. Unnaturaly, natural - for BOTH of them. Loved it! Seriously. you have great skill and understanding of pace and beats in terms of character and storytelling. Keep writing.

loved it so much, it makes sense. and i think agree with the others about the geekbaby, it's needed.

SO CUTE!
I wish that would happen on the show already. i'm just waiting for more!!
Love the story

Brilliant story! One of the best I've read in a while... so in character, so lovely, so well-written... so GREAT! [favourited] Loved it!

Ella x