I absolutely love this story!! :) Except for going a bit too fast in the beginning, it was amazing! The way you write is beautiful and I think you captured all the characters perfectly! I am definitely gonna read the sequel which I'm sure will be just as good. Keep on writing!

AWESOME STORY

I love this story! You have an amazing writing style! Definitely the best I've read so far for keeping the characters as they should be!

Yikes, this seems to be a cliffie. I'll add this but if the sequel isn't there or its really bad then I'm removing it. Interesting twist! JYJYs!~~

Are you stephanie meyer?? If you're not, i gotta say: WOW!

This story could be right out of the book! I swear, you right so in character, the scenes are so vivid! I can fool myself to believing that I'm actually reading some alternate book Stephanie Meyer wrote!

Great Story, and man, are you an awesome author!!

i love the story! i know you said chapter 16 was pointess; but, it certainly lightened the mood, was really cute and fun to read. thank you

i almost cried for bella in the end .,..
i have serious problems...
but i LOVE this story :)

this is an AMAZING story! your description at the beginning of how bella clings to edward while she is dying and how he still manages to resist her blood even while it is spurting from her, OMG it's so powerful!

She wouldnt be able to bite him and he cant bleed

You do know vampires have no blood don't you?

this is a fantastic story. I just found it yesterday and couldn't put it down. I can't wait to read the sequel!

Dear god, Molly. I think if you had any more reviews, I'd Thoreau-up.

P.S. My jaw is out of socket. I don't even know how that works.

great story
great writing and i like the ideas you've had
i wonder what bellas power will be?
keep up the great writing

I had to add one more review, seeing it would put you at 10!

Great Story! I'm moving on to the sequel!