it was good make more please...

This was awesomeness, though I'm not sure about the rating. I mean they DO have sex. But then again, its not really described. lol. Either way such a cute story. The shower scene was my favorite part I think, it still showed that Setsuna still had problems, but could deal with them, and that they were going to have a future together. The magic part at the end was good too, because it isn't just Setsuna (even though I love her. :D) but Negi and Asuna as well. They are her best friends and helped Setsuna do this.

AwEsOMe! i absolutley LOVED this fic...Thank you so much for writing it..i hope to read more from you soon!

Nice story, nice story I love Konosetsu and this is a great fic!!

I love konosetsu, please continue writing. This story was so sweet and romantic I loved it. I've read your other stories and I wish if you could continue the one's you didn't finish that would be awsome. Your a really good writer, I've always wanted to write fanfics about konosetsu but, I'm to busy working on my book, I'm an author and all but, I can be lazy sometimes. Well keep on writing, O great Neo Horizon. And I'm not just saying that, you are great even if I don't know you. :) :)

Yay another awesome fic, thanks for the read XD!

omgosh, amazing.. the best konosetsu i ever readed >D

sorry, my english sux... i had many problems with my dictionary to read all of this.. =D but i love it ><

:] ty to write such good history

OMG!I loved it! Now I know what I'm gonna do for my girl's birthday. No magic of course, but the fireworks and the beach were freakin awesome!!

Haha this is great ^__^ I loved it , and there's nothing else I can say to express about how I felt about this "fanfic" :3 it was perfectly though out and the plot was great too~ though one thing, the school they're in, wasn't it a middle school? LOL...sorry to point out your BIG mistake :3 if it was middle school, how could neither of them well, get to be 18? :3 xD though it doesn't matter to the story it self at all~ its just a wonderful and great story~ ^__^

Nice sequel, and that was one of the best date those two ever had (in any fanfics that I read). It's good to see their relationship blooming and how they start to have better understanding of each other, especially on Setsuna's part. Great job :)

That was a good sequel! Very long for a one shot...Sorta. And very, very detailed. Oh, also thanks for putting me into the end credits!

*smile* Ah, the sweetness. This is going into my favorites.

First up, I just want to say that this was an excellent sequel to a fic that I'd liked greatly. If this is how these two are going to become a few years from now, who cares about OOCness. Not to mention that ikka found it really well-written ...and flaming hot as well.

Setsuna's constant blushing is too cute to resist. Also, the way Konoka and her were acting around each other practically shouts "honeymoon"...major squeeness abounds XD

One last thing though, perhaps you could consider inserting a page divider between the shower and swimsuit scenes? It was slightly jarring in transition.

Cheers,
ikka

This is even better than its prequel. Thanks for writing more of it. Setsuna and Konoka are always so cute together. And this bday celebration was just so romantic. Love it!

omg. i love it!
this fic is awesome~
its waay cute. XD

keep up the good work!!
cant wait for your next fic! :D
lol

One word...TOO CUTE! okay, two ^_-