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| superfelix 2008-03-03 ch 2, | abuseOh, a wonderful story. Very hot love scene, I like to read how they make love. To see Alex as the cook is great. In a lot of fanfics Bobby is the cook. Now I can go to bed and think of all. THANKS for sharing it with me. Go on with your work! |
| serendipitysidle 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abusei've just finished the first chapter and it's looking good, definately going to read the rest! but i wanted to tell you before i forgot that merlot is usually served at room temp, white wine is chilled. |
| The Confused One 2007-03-22 ch 2, | abuseThis was very good. :) Very hot. :) Fabulous work. I enjoyed it a lot. |
| Amber-Jade James 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI think you should continue. it is a good start keep it up Cheers! AJ James |
| ahku84 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was really cute. More chapters would be good, but you could just make other short stories. I really liked this one, I love the loyal dog part |
| The Confused One 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseAww. :D Very sweet. I love their inner thoughts. They made me laugh. I'm happy they kissed. :D And really, while more is always great, this one doesn't need more. It's a great, tidy ending as it is. :) You have to be careful. Sometimes you can write too much. |