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Reviews For: A Friendly Wager

superfelix
2008-03-03
ch 2,
abuseOh, a wonderful story. Very hot love scene, I like to read how they make love.

To see Alex as the cook is great. In a lot of fanfics Bobby is the cook.

Now I can go to bed and think of all.

THANKS for sharing it with me.

Go on with your work!
serendipitysidle
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abusei've just finished the first chapter and it's looking good, definately going to read the rest! but i wanted to tell you before i forgot that merlot is usually served at room temp, white wine is chilled.
The Confused One
2007-03-22
ch 2,
abuseThis was very good. :) Very hot. :) Fabulous work. I enjoyed it a lot.
Amber-Jade James
2007-03-21
ch 1,
abuseI think you should continue. it is a good start keep it up

Cheers!

AJ James
ahku84
2007-03-21
ch 1,
abuseI thought it was really cute. More chapters would be good, but you could just make other short stories. I really liked this one, I love the loyal dog part
The Confused One
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseAww. :D Very sweet. I love their inner thoughts. They made me laugh. I'm happy they kissed. :D And really, while more is always great, this one doesn't need more. It's a great, tidy ending as it is. :) You have to be careful. Sometimes you can write too much.
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