I really like it; the only thing I really didn't like was all the page breakers... I understand if you use italics, but I thought that that would be enough.

Good job interweaving the prequels with this scene. However, it would be great if you or a beta could run back over this and fix some of the spelling and grammar errors. Obvious you intended some of them, which is fine, but there's enough mistakes that they detract from your work. It's just so good that I hate to see anything get in the way. :)

I enjoyed this story very much. It was well written, not sappy. Quite touching. Thanks.