It is seriously good, it already made me sad. I'm looking foraward to more, keep it up!

i love it! keep up the chapters! i cant wait till the next one!

I love it! Keep it up! ^^

I just started reading this story yesterday, I LOVE IT! You are a great writer! update soon!

Asch gets to train with the Black Lion. Cool. Largo is nice. waiting patiently for the next part.

Aww, that's so cute. I like how you characterized Largo; he's very friendly. Can't wait for more!

Van lied. I can't believe it(actually I can). Good story.

Really good characterization of Asch - I thought it was very realistic given the circumstances. I can't wait to see more; hopefully we'll see some of the God-Generals soon. ^_~