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Reviews For: Temptation

Olaf74
2008-07-30
ch 1,
abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.
The-Resident
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseI could use one for the same reason.
Hahukum Konn
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseHah, go Arthur Weasley! :D If anyone needs the money, it's them. :)
Memory King
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abuseInteresting and well written, not much use for that idea in a full story, but quite amusing nonetheless.

I'm partial to Molly and Felix Felicis, however.
Guaja
2007-11-08
ch 1,
abuseHehehe, funny...
DaftPenguinofDoom
2007-10-02
ch 1,
abuseEvil. Absolutely evil. I love it.
Tama Saga
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuse*snicker*
Tobang
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseI 'got' it and i liked it.

~Tobang
xXRainbowSkittlesXx
2007-07-08
ch 1,
abuseHehehe. Great start. "He hadn't meant to do it, honestly." Wow. Awesome drabble.
SomeGuyFawkes
2007-06-09
ch 1,
abuseNo, this is OOC for Arthur.

That's the problem with a witch story. All bits of good or bad luck can easily be blamed on magical meddling.
Bagge
2007-03-31
ch 1,
abuseHah! Great idea. It wasn't just luck, that the Weasley's won money enough for a Egypt vacation. You stringed canon events together in a nice way - that lottery price, Hermione's time turner, Ginny's desperate need of a vacation.

Also, you did the mystery great justice. The ill boding and mysterious start of the drabble is exchanged with a good nature family father doing a little harmless stretching of the rules.

In all - 100 very well used words.
Seravenia Briar Rose
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuseI love it. Kind of a "stick it to the man" moment.
Branackus
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuseI love it, it does sound like what he could do.
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