Hee hee. Very cute and clever. Jaer and Jaerin are rather fun fellows, aren't they? The part when Peter and Ed discover the "intruders" is hilarious.

Many great lines, but this is one of my absolute favorites:
But when Peter suggested they all go out to Starbucks for some coffee, the brothers rose hastily and declined, saying their author simply hated it and (though they never really found out from her what ‘cof-fee’ was) if they came home smelling like it she might not appreciate it and anyway they really should be going…--Heh heh. Hilarious.

As usual, another good CK. Here's to hoping you write another one soon and that you get a new muse soon. :)

I was about to indignantly start a diatribe on how Ariella was a perfectly respectable name (and you can tell my prejudice is not unfounded by glancing at my username which is derived from my own) in a rather joking manner, and ending with a compliment on the cleverness of your story, but when I reached the end I found it quite unecessary (naturally I mean the rant).

Ck is really clever, and I enjoy reading it; I hope you write some more, of course! I think the incident with Eustace and Incest was my personal favorite. I'm going to continue to trawl through your stories now.

P.S. Incindentally, did you know that Ariella in Hebrew means 'Lioness of God'? The male derivative (Ariel) means 'Lion of God'. I wonder what Aslan would think.

Absolutely hysterical! I've read all seven of these in one sitting... and I have never laughed so hard in my entire life! I've also enjoyed your 'How To Kill A Narnian Mary Sue' story! Please write more!

Aw, it's nice to see the Canon Keepers interacting with non Sue- or Stu-ish OC's for once. :-) I've never actually read a fic with Jaer and Jaerin in it before, but they sound pretty cool. Finally Peter and Edmund get a break, lol!

by rowling do you mean hp?

Funny from beginning to end! I heart this series of yours. Great job!

Brilliant! I loved Peter's definition of author - and the comment about doing stuff to wind their sister up, and their office being a come-down from Cair Paravel. (You also mentioned Rowling on the 8th floor - are you going to write any Canon Keepers for Harry P stories??)
I'm enjoying "How to kill Mary sue" but do keep going with Canon Keepers - it's hilarious!
Cheers, Paula

“The elevator? You, humming elevator music? Peter Pevensie, how could you sink so low?”

Ha! This was funny as hell from beginning to end. Bravo zulu!

Well! I don't know what you meant about not being quite as funny as others. I like this! True, I know the characters but I really like the way you used them. The only swap I would have made is for Jaer to be practicing forgery and Jaerin drawing spiders. However, Jaer would not have responded like Jaerin did. His response was much better. I do think you did a good job, therefore, I shall say so:

Good job!

:-)

I've read Dream-dashers, and I was heartily impressed with it. Of course, since becoming addicted to CK, I've wondered how those characters got through the admission process. Maybe, you could do one on Ariella next. Oh, that would be fun (evil glint in eye)

These CK are great. you should make to another with Lucy and Susan.