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| Maiyuui 2007-03-20 ch 1, | abuseReally beautifully written...so sad it kinda made me tear up a bit at the end. I do wish it was a bit longer to flush out their characters a little more, but I'm satisfied :) |
| yuux3 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuselove it. the ending was pretty sad. i want to hug both of them. |
| sakuuya 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseBrr... Cold Fai is awesome. I really like the way you portrayed both him and Kuro. Also, I'm very curious as to what Kuro's payment was. But, the ending... Kurogane wouldn't say a Christian prayer. He's probably Shinto, if he's any religion at all. |
| Ahria 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was... strange, but a good kind of strange. The ending was sad! I really liked the imagery there, though. |
| Lynne5 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is really strange. The idea is great. Removing masks and Fay's reaction, it is well-written. This angry, cold Fay is amazing. But why is Kurogane praying? What is his religion? It felt a bit odd. But it is fanfiction, you do what you want!^^ |
| blackspica 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseaww, the ending is so sad. and fai spoke so many colorful words that makes him OOC, lol. anyway, great job and keep writing!^-^ |