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Reviews For: Pushing the Saints to sins

Maiyuui
2007-03-20
ch 1,
abuseReally beautifully written...so sad it kinda made me tear up a bit at the end. I do wish it was a bit longer to flush out their characters a little more, but I'm satisfied :)
yuux3
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuselove it.
the ending was pretty sad.
i want to hug both of them.
sakuuya
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuseBrr... Cold Fai is awesome. I really like the way you portrayed both him and Kuro. Also, I'm very curious as to what Kuro's payment was.

But, the ending... Kurogane wouldn't say a Christian prayer. He's probably Shinto, if he's any religion at all.
Ahria
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was... strange, but a good kind of strange. The ending was sad! I really liked the imagery there, though.
Lynne5
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuseThis is really strange. The idea is great. Removing masks and Fay's reaction, it is well-written. This angry, cold Fay is amazing.
But why is Kurogane praying? What is his religion? It felt a bit odd. But it is fanfiction, you do what you want!^^
blackspica
2007-03-19
ch 1,
abuseaww, the ending is so sad.
and fai spoke so many colorful words that makes him OOC, lol.
anyway, great job and keep writing!^-^
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