 xoRaining Diamondsox 2007-03-19 . chapter 1Nice... I actually really liked this. It was an interesting take on Axel's former life, and I like how he wasn't totally gay, but not totally straight... somewhere in between. Confused, just like the story came off. Even though it was really emotionless, it all kind of fit, you know? Since he had no emotions as a Nobody, after all.
All I know is that after reading that story, and then suddenly going back to the present... it was actually a bit sad. I felt sorry for poor Lea, and it was hard to grasp that this was what Lea had become. I meant that all in a good way, btw.
Overall, nice job!
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