Dude awsome story! Are you going to continue it? It's coming along great.

Kya~!! You are making me squeal like a crazed fangirl >_< Great beginning chap, can't wait for the next one ^^.

P.S. ありがとうね！ 妹のSakura～ちゃん。Thanks for getting your おねえさん　to write this story ^.~

Ahh...very good.

I liked the last part the best, simply because of Roxas's calm acceptance of that. xD Sounds like him.

that was definately cute, no doubt about it.
It's so sweet how Axel's so patient with Roxas : )

Makes me all fuzzy inside.

Continue to write more!

Aw the cuteness!

Torment them more! That fic was definately worth tormenting random bishi-peoples. :) Great job! I loved how you described the tiger-eeyd man... And Demy! Sque! I loved him. ^^ And Axel... Meh...

Definately my favorite part in the whole fic, well, besides the whole fainting part anyway:

Axel shook his head. “Let him BREATHE, Demyx.” He said in an exasperated tone of voice one might use with an immature co-worker; or a boisterous older brother.

Great job, lol. Have fun and keep up that writing! ^^

kya! I loved it! That ending was like...*¬* really good! I hope you make a full version very soon!!

omg sugoyi! *pouts**demands more chap.*

i live that fic it is so sweet. its really well written. it would be a good story.

Aw!! ^_^ It's so cute I love it! I always wanted someone to write a story like this! I hope u write more soon!

sque x3 I demand a sequel. now. :3

i love the tension and the suspense of when Roxas is going to remember, and how egar Axel sounds :3 and the fact that Demyx is so enthusiastic on seeing Roxas again :]
*glomps you and gives cookies*

You must keep this story going it really good I love the way you write this it rockz!Well done! please continue this!

Ohh, this was good! I always had thought about what would have happened if Roxas had gone with Axel. Anyway, super cute! >w< Make sure to update soon!

zah! You'd better be continuing this story its ace XD, hai?