So, after finishing Her Beloved I went to read more of your stuff and had a 'oh, look! I read and loved that one!' Haha, funny...anyway, brilliant story. I'll admit, for a sec, I thought Hope was Iola...weird huh? Anywho, this was awesome.

Thank goodness for happy endings. This world's got too much sadness for anymore tragedies!

Interesting story. Very spooky. Thanks, Beth

Very scary story, very awesome ending.

I loved the ending!

Fantastic story!

Joe had better not die.

Great chapter!

Fantastic chapter!

oh, this almost made me cry! pleaasee update! poor joe and Frank!

Ha! The baddie's about to go into a monologue! And, as I learned in The Incredibles, monologuing always leads to the baddie's downfall! :)

... Right? I sure hope so... I rather like our boys the way the are - alive, namely.

Glad to see you back! Can't wait for more!

moogsthewriter

Wow... Really creepy story... But a good kind of creepy, not the sort of horror-creepy that I don't like very much. I love the way you capture the brothers' mental states, and show how each depends so much on the other.

And you're really good at killer last lines, lol!

Great chapter! I love the story. Update soon!

*gapes*

WHY DID YOU END IT THERE?

I'M gonna die waiting for what happens next.

*sobs pitifully*

This was good, and I REALLY cant wait until the next chapter! Please update soon! :)

-Sakoko-chan

So the girl is Joe now? Hm... my poor boys! Please, keep up the great work - you're doing awesome! I need more!

moogsthewriter

Okay, that last line was pretty creepy. But you've still got me on the edge of my seat - please, please update soon! The suspense just might kill me!

moogsthewriter