Great so far, creepy, but great.

Holy crud. That was... just some kind of vision... right? Or... something? *shiver* Creepy!

Awesome story so far, though! I really like it! Keep it up!

moogsthewriter

When did Callie get there?

Reminds me of TCM? Did you mean to do that?

Callie died! oh Frank I'll be there for you! (no offence I've always hated her, like Joe's girlfriend better Iola?) Any ways pleaes continue, and I'm sorry I didn't get to review to you sooner been real busy. Any ways poor Callie (even if I didn't really like her I wouldn't kill her well maybe, shh don't tell n one)

WOW - What a great story you have so far! I think you've created the perfect balance of detail and excitement - the story is interesting to read and very atmospheric, but at the same time, plenty of action is taking place. I also think your characterisation is really good, from what I've seen so far of the boys.

Looking forward to reading more soon!

Great chapter! OMG! I love this story! Is Callie really dead, or is he hallucinating?

what? only 3 paragraphs? :(

More? Is there more?

hmm I wonder what's going to happen is okay every author gets road block, including me. I hate it when that happens sometimes it takes me months to get it out of it. Any ways please continue thanks. _

O, this is sounding like it will be wonderfully creepy! Update soon!

O! This looks like it's going to interesting it'll probably give me nightmares but I'm hooke dalready! lol.

Interesting. I get scared of a lot of things I hope your fanfiction dont give me nightmares. xD I hope to see you update soon so i can find out what the story is about.D

Very intriguing. Can't wait to see where you take this story. Update soon.

author says: Remember: the faster you review, the faster comes chapter two!

meta says: okay. i'm trying my luck. now, chapter 2 please!