i think you should update. i miss reading your updates.

update soon. good story.

Can you write more and finish this I really like it

OMG! I love the story!

I cant wait to see what happens next between Grissom and Sara and of course the Jeremy and owen and Olivia!!

Keep up the great work!!
UPDATE SOON!

*tear* great chapter!

What a wonderful story. Please continue with it. I want to know how it progresses. Thanks and keep up the good work.

what a really nice chapter. It's good to read about happy times sometimes. anne

Kids can be cruel sometimes.But violence is never the answer.

Please continue with this story... It's a great story and I can't wait till I read more. :-)

oh brilliantly done! great chapter!! can't wait for more!

that stupid other boy! That's just so... okay, you wrote it really well. Thanks for writing. *~*kay

aw totally adorable!

Kids can be so cruel. Nice to see the family of five together.

Been a long time. Glad to see the update. I'm also glad to see that Grissom has decided to make the move.

hooray for the geeks finally getting on the same page. Nice chapter, anne