Hahahaha! That was a great story! So now I know how Alfonso the lying little ba-um, I mean snot tricked himself up the ranks. Good job! :)

Heh heh good story... Pleeze pleeze pleeze PLEEZE write somemore, do another one with Alfonso in it!

Lol! This is just like Alfonso to be a little liar. Although he's a bit of a brat, it is pretty fun to include him for a good plot, ne? Great story! It's just so original! I likes it! And the way you put your words in this fic just sounded so "royal" to me. Nice atmospheric background!

Ohhh, you must play the game at one time or another. _ It's great, along with this fic! I adore Enrique as well, and Alfonso's just...really, really hilarious. I'm actually quite fond of the guy...for some strange reason that is tangled in my twisted mind...heh heh. Anyway, you write beautifully, and this is a very impressive fic that portrays the characters perfectly.

*eyes swell* YOU NEVER PLAYED SKIES OF ARCADIA! ommigod...o.o...Damn...Nice 'fic! _

Well, for having never played the game, this is fantastic! You captured Alfonso's and Enrique's personalities beautifully!