What makes this story stand out is the last line. What a total concession on his part. Strange, obscure, and nicely told. Thanks!

Good story so far. Would love to see it taken further.

What an awesome story!! The end really brought out such greater meaning from the first 3/4th of the story to make it SO much richer. And I was totally surprised by the ending, too, which makes it even better:-) Okay, it's after 3am, so I'm probably not making any sense...

I read this on Wraithbait. Excellent work. Disturbing yet fascinating. Take that not-John!