horny kids.

Aw...I liked i hope u update soon i really like this story.

Aw. What a wonderfully sweet yet very emotional chapter. I think that you portrayed all of the characters emotions wonderfully given the situation they're all in. I can tell a lot is going to happen in future chapters to get everything all straightened out. Again, wonderful chapter can't wait for the next. :)

I was correct

Let me guess- Ella is actually Dagerron's wife and Vida and Madison are the twins.

Love it! Alittle akward for me in the M part but still a great chapter!

all i can say is this WOW! i just gotten back into nick and madison pairings again (used to be a daggeron/madison fan, i still am though) anyway i love it! hurry with the next chapter!

I liked it. I maybe an adult but this chapter a little to strong for me. I really did like it.

Excellent!

wow, good chapter i liked seeing Vida show and emothion that was softer than usual and i love Maddie/Nick pairings so very nice i would expect nothing less from you

Wow... Amazing chapter! Please update soon!

O.O! You went to Morphicon? :P Lucky brat. :D

Nicely Done! I love how you use Xander's powers to find Vida and the Nick/Madision bedroom scene was done with taste and not vulgarity.

Haha, I think my favorite part of this chapter was seeing Xander finally putting his Earth powers to good use and actually being able to use them successfully! And yay for all the Vander fans out there.

Like the love scene between Nick and Maddie. It was really different from a lot of the previous ones you had written, and while I felt Madison initiating the love-making was a little out of character, I thought everything else was a really true portrayal of her and situation. Then again, Madison was better at speaking her mind toward the end of the series, so who knows?

I hope things turn out OK with Vida and Maddie's dad. I really.. I dunno, I am not too down with the idea of him suddenly turning into some awful person...

Anyway, still LOVIN' this story. Update soon!

Heh. This is a really intriguing idea. From what I understand and saw of Mystic Force, poor Daggeron was pretty underdeveloped, which is a shame. A knight? I mean, come on, how much stuff can be done with that?

And you did an excellent job weaving Daggeron's search. The original characters we saw were well-done and captured the sense of a fantasical world that has seen much strife. I also really enjoy the relationships between the MF Rangers themselves. Especially Chip running away. That part made me giggle.

I think the moment you introduced Ella/Elektra, I knew where the story was going - I just wasn't sure how long it would take to get there. And the bit about the bright light sprite carrying the ocean and the wind - nice. You have a knack for coming up with prophecies. :)

My only small nit is Alex. He doesn't seem like the type of person to become a Nazi at the mere mention of his adopted daughters' biological father. He struck me more as a slight work-a-holic and someone who would shut down in the face of all this drama. That said, Vida's reaction was right on the mark.

Overall, excellent work with this piece. I'm certainly looking forward to more. :D

-EK

OMG! I love this story. I had a feeling it was Daggeron but this is awsome. Update ASAP Plz!