this sounds pretty good for a beginning can't wait to see
what happens next.
bye bye

I like it a lot!XD
I cant wait for chapter 2.

very interesting.
short but very nice.
i would like to know.
but still the death note is all about killing people.
even if you had people over to the police, 'justice' would still be killing people.

interesting!Update soon!

very interesting. could you make the chapters a little longer? other than that i like it.