not bad not bad

i had an embarrassing outburst of laughter at the last line haha

good job

lol I liked the ending, lol that was great.

haha very cute. Loved the ending :-)

good, nicely done. I like drabble...

klio

:)

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Hehe. Great ending. I always like these. Good story!

This was very sweet. James was persistent, you've got to give him that. Great job though! Loved the ending.

~Narcissa B Malfoy~