 tanya2byour21 5/12/12 . chapter 8OH please tell me this story it not over or that you have stopped working on it. I want to know what is going to happen next. Please please please I need to know what is going to happen next. Please post more soon.
Tanya |
 finlaure 3/7/12 . chapter 8oh yeh, I can see them stopping Gibbs when a child was involved, I wonder if Abby could use a chair and a whip like lion tamers do? Cause Gibbs is going to be a bear to deal with,,, I wonder just how strenous activity Gibbs can stand,,, Abby can always use that as a distraction. |
 finlaure 3/7/12 . chapter 7I don't know if the car was meant for them,,, anyone could have stopped,,, but is someone targeting them now?
oh and the first part was steaming! |
 finlaure 3/7/12 . chapter 6I wonder if they will ever get to the bed,,, they will probably shake it to the ground. |
 finlaure 3/7/12 . chapter 5computer failure due to hotness of content
mind failure due to hotness of chapter |
 finlaure 3/7/12 . chapter 4Loved how her Big Bro Tony checked up on her,,, while giving her the info on Gibbs,,,
But mostly LOVED a man of few words, and Bigger actions,
can't wait for the next chapter.
just hope ffn coopperates,, it it giving me fits. |
 finlaure 3/7/12 . chapter 3I SOOO LOVE how they have each other whom they can be REAL with. Abby doesn't have to be her 'happy-happy' self, and Gibbs can show his real emotions. Very Good chapter! |
 finlaure 3/7/12 . chapter 2Ok. So Abby has the same feelings that Gibbs has.
It is going to take a headslap to get them to admit it!
I hope not.
And the end scene is sooo sweet! |
 finlaure 3/7/12 . chapter 1That scene in the garage was soo powerful,,, I really thought Gibbs was going to turn around and choke Tim. Also it was only the second time that he has dropped his coffee,,, the other time was when Abby was in danger too,,, |
 Stormygrl0804 2/27/12 . chapter 8This story is great, will it ever be finished, or was it continued in another story? |
 xcharXroseX 5/29/11 . chapter 8WOW XX THE STORY IS GREAT X I LOVE ABBY AND GIBBS XXX 33 |
 srushton24 5/1/11 . chapter 8Love it, very easy to read. Please continue I am totally into the story. Thanks for your work. |
 rennogsd1996 5/1/11 . chapter 8really looking forward to the end of the story. you're a terrific writer. thanks for all your hard work. |
 Talldi 4/22/11 . chapter 8Oh boy...this is getting good! Please don't keep me waiting too long1 ;) |
 Talldi 4/22/11 . chapter 5Excellent! Great visual! Keep it coming... |