i love this story, wonder what's going to happen next.
if suboshi is the seventh seishi of suzaku, does that mean that chiriko is the seventh seishi of seiryu?

update soon, the plot is great

Continue! I can't wait what will happen!

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!! This is getting good! I want to see want happens next! PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAPTER AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!!!!

C-O-N-T-I-N-U-E!L-O-V-E T-H-I-S F-I-C
M-U-S-T C-O-N-T-I-N-U-E!!!!!!

I love this fic! Please, please, please continue! :)

I normally don't review stories, but tis one is good enough I think I shall. First off, I agree with most of the other reviews (the whole Amiboshi is a Seiryuu, Suboshi is a Susaku thing is interesting). Also, I like the fact that you didn't just make up some background story and followed what you knew of Ryuusei Den. I haven't read it either so...Please write the next chapter soon!

What, no mores? *begging kitten eyes* It would be a greaat thing.

Hey, put up your WK fics! I just saw the first seven eps this week, and man do they angst well. WeiB Kreuz!

Just one more gush: I love it I love it I love it I love it! Where's that button you can push to mark a fic as someone's favorite? It's gone! Argh... So, just to reiterate, Dreamwalker, you rock. This fic is fabulous. Keep on writing.

Argh! I wrote this whole big second review but it didn't get up since only one review is allowed per chapter so........ *deep breath* I would like to disagree with (previous reviewer) Demon Princess in saying that it would have been better if Amiboshi was the Suzaku Senshi. I think it's *much* more interesting that the author decided to pick Suboshi as the Suzaku Star since it can lead to so many choices different from the manga/anime. And now we can see some intereaction between him and the rest of Miaka's group! Actually explore such a great character, to see his choices. We all know that Amiboshi would have done well as a Suzaku, but Suboshi? It takes thought, concentration, and a good author to pull it off and in character. And from what I've seen, Dreamwalker is *very* good. So to sum it up, I love the author's decision to use Suboshi :)

I love your fanfics, Dreamwalker. I've been coming and going on your FY/Yui fanfic site, and I always check to see if you've put up the next part to your Retribution fic, and especially this one, Breaking Bonds. You have a great flair for writing and getting into the characters and making them sound and feel human. You write the stuff I wished would have happen in the real version of FY, since I love Yui, Suboshi, and Amiboshi.

And this little twist, one a Suzaku senshi and the other a Seiryuu, is fantastic! It's very well written and I can hardly imagine what ramifications would result in this deviation of fates. (So cool! Eeee!)

I eagerly await your next chapter. ** luck writing! - RubyRage_sq@yahoo.com

That was so good! Keep writing! Hurry, hurry! I'm very impatient here!

Mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!!!

I really liked the plot for this one!
It was original but i think she put the wrong twin on the wrong side but I guess that makes a good story!
I just get a lil' confused since I didn't kno Amiboshi and Suboshi's real names and it got real confusing when she kept switching back and forth.
But all in all I like this story so far and I can't wait to read more!! Ü

WOWIE! I guess I like this after all! Bravo! Continue!

I like it very much. I'm a Seiryuu Twinds fan. ^^; I'll read anything with they're name attached. They're so KAWAII! ^^; Sorry, I'm a bit hyper today. Well, please post the next chapters soon! Ja! ^_~