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Corlath
2008-06-09
ch 1,
abuse... oh my god... that is the saddest most beautiful thing i have every read, even now, a couple of minutes later i still have tears rolling down my cheeks...
csimouse
2008-05-02
ch 1,
abuseWhoa...I was blown away. That was so beautifully done. I was in tears...You did an amazing job.
Aliengirla
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseThat was so sad... Sniff
Fiction Trouble
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuseThis was beautiful it made tears come to my eyes.
harassedbytheFBI
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseholy ** that was sad, but damn it was beautiful. don't stop writing.
jay
2008-04-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseI cried once again. This story is so beautiful but so sad.

"I want to go on for you and Lindsey but..." She stops to catch her breath, "baby, I'm...tired So tired."

This line actually made me think about how hard it must be to stop fighting death when all you want to do is be there for your loved ones.
frenchflotus
2008-03-26
ch 1,
abuseOMG it's beautiful... I'm at work and I'm crying. I'm loss at word. It wake up some personal memories, you've succeded in capturing those painful moments and feelings.
Well, it's simply and definetly beautiful.
AlexisFFMimi
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseThis is the first time a fic has really made me cry. My heart ached while i read until it broke when i got to the end. I finished 5 minutes ago and tears are still managing to creep from my eyes...You did a beautiful job
Titpom1
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abuseYou make me cry... it's a first !

Really beautiful story...
Ponys
2007-11-17
ch 1,
abuseAgain I cried... I have to stop reading this story!!
lazy ponys
2007-11-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseah, okay, so apparently I didn't review before.. bad me!

cried cried cried, even the second time I read this
really, an absolutely wonderful story.

You did more than right ;)


byee!
lazy ponys who forgot her password
roxy
2007-10-05
ch 1, anon.
abusethat was so lovely. i had real tears. well done x
QTR
2007-09-22
ch 1,
abuseOh god that was so touching and sad I'm bawling my eyes out here... it's a story but the way you wrote it made me feel like I was right there with Sara losing Catherine as well.

Fantastic job.

*sobs*
Katlynn888
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseYou didn't warn me that Catherin was dieing! I thought she was going away for a little while! Tears are running down my face! this story was so sad! poor Sara! But it was well written, I gotta give ya that!

-Lynn
Teamarie
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseyou made me cry...that was so beautiful, and so sad...
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